| Reviews for The Devil Within Her |
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Fox chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 This is so disgusting to be honest. U just ruined my appetite! I love tekken but i don't love disgusting stuff like this! Ewwwwwwwwww! U disgust me! I'm just 15 so i think some disgusting bull honkey like this is just not meant for me, and it will never be meant for me, even when i grow up! I'm disgusted, sorry but i'm just so disgusted... ugh... |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/13/2018 Thanks for deciding to continue this!oh and what is the name of the account that you are gonna publish your stories there?and please continue your other stories as well they are awesome too |
Ciel De Luna chapter 5 . 3/5/2018 Hey! Guys I've been locked out of my account...like seriously! I've been trying to get into it for years and no luck... I am alive! And I want to continue! I will try to post In another place. Im going to be on Archive of Our Own! email me: with DEVIL JIN in the subject for updates when I post! |
John chapter 1 . 3/10/2017 Oh, i love it alright. pretty lit. like the storyline. bring out the next chapters please... |
Alice chapter 1 . 2/26/2016 Hi I am Alice I like tekken |
Latias426 chapter 9 . 4/23/2015 What I really want to say has already been said by Vgirl... Sooo... Yeah. Please give conclusion to this :(( Hahaha I may be 3 years late but.. Hey! Tekken 7 is going to be released this year, so I hope it kind of brings back the fire into this story? |
Latias426 chapter 9 . 4/23/2015 Oh my g, why? Someone answered to your contest before, right? Why did you still not make a chapter to complete this!? :( HEY! I hope that you are not dead! Please update this! :(( Holy cow, leaving the readers hanging!? That's just heartbreaking... :'( Yes, and I know I may have been 3 years late but... Come on! :( PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I REALLY HOPE YOU ARE NOT DEAD. 3 Give us the wrap-up for this :(( |
biktoriatori chapter 8 . 9/9/2014 Hi, I have comment again here! Can you please continue the story? I like it really much!? Thank you. :-) |
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 9 . 8/6/2014 Its a sad yet sexual exciting story but I do wonder what the outcomes would will be... |
Coise chapter 1 . 6/21/2014 Love love story. Will there be another chapter, because I think you should continue. |
Vgirl chapter 9 . 5/6/2014 It has been over 2 years since your last update of this story but I still feel compelled to write to you though I'm not sure that you are still checking these. I read all the chapters today and I enjoyed your story very much as I was literally on the edge of my seat as I read the story. I love the Asuka x Jin pairing and haven't been able to find a lot of it since it's probably seen as taboo which saddens me. I'm not going to try and urge you to continue this story as it has been two years and I fear that if you were to pick it up again, without having an actual interest in continuing, it would end disappointingly. I do wish to see this story continue, or even conclude, but not unless your heart is in it. Your story was enjoyable and I may read it again sometime when I'm in the Tekken pairing mood. Thank you very much for writing it. |
AcceL-eRatoR19 chapter 9 . 3/14/2014 make another chapter pls.. Because of your cliffhanger I couldn't sleep well for weeks, only thinking about how are u going to end your story just pls just finished it |
Kazama Sakura chapter 9 . 2/25/2014 Hello, I want to say that I like yours fiction entitled 'The Devil Within Her'. I just read recently and instantly fell in love, will you continue to finish the next part? I once wondered how to end the story of Asuka, Jin and Devil Jin? Sorry if my English was bad at all, in fact I had a little trouble speaking English. thank you |
Ladyabsinthe91 chapter 9 . 2/17/2014 Pleeeease write more! I think I cried a little reading the ending. |
madeline.go.9 chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 FUCK YOU DEVIL JIN WHAT THE FUCK WHY DID YOU FUCKING RAPE HER MAN *CRIES WHILE GETTING MAD* |