Loved it !

I laugh like crazy when i read Imagine Jenny's surprise when she walked outside and saw Raven pinning him to the deck.
XDDD

Hm I liked it :D continue?

It's 2:00 in the morning and I am now reading your other Mal/Rae stories. SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK! XD

I LOVE your story-telling style! Your one-shots are teh awesomeness! And I love how your steamy parts are so sweet and don't get explicit. It took me a bit to figure out some of the names, though. But maybe that's not important. The IMPORTANT part is that it's Mal/Rae 8D

Nice, I enjoyed that.

I can't believe that you only had 2 reviews, this is a freaking fantastic oneshot and I thank you for sharing it on this site.

An amazing stors. I really really liked it. Too bad it's so short. I would love to read more!

Besides the idea of the story, the corruption, I enjoyed it that there where only little scenes.

Stories like yours always remind me it's worth to read fiction in english.

Thank you very much for writing and uppoading

Minu

dude, Malchior totally corrupted Raven didn't he?

Good job!

~Rose