BRAVO! :-D What a lovely, touching, and satisfying story! I also must commend you on your writing skills, both from a grammar and storyline aspects. I'm so glad I found this story just yesterday! And, I'll tell you what else: if I should ever quit stalling like a darn coward and just try to write my first phanfic, I hope it's anywhere near half as good as yours. :-). Best wishes, Missy

Go Erik, GO! Go for Christine; don't you stop! Go, mighty Phantom and get that Fop! ;-)

Fop, thy name is arrogance. :-(

Always! These 2 brilliant people, Erik especially, talk and debate and argue and accuse and deny and plead for love and forgiveness... but when it's finally given, Erik doesn't accept it no matter WHAT. YES, of course Christine's hurt him so often and deeply, so his disbelief IS mostly her own fault. But c'mon, girl! You know you wouldn't be happy with Monseiur Fop - and wait until you find out who gave information for that absurd opera! So quit talking and get to loving, you two lovers! Argh!

Erik albeit understandably so must be the world's worst masochist.

Beautiful! AND ... Uh-oh... The War is ON!

This is seriously one of the best scenes in the Phandom, I can't even! I'm so scared, who shot whom! Must read on!

Ooh, this is getting really good! I love the mischievous Erik that is so easy to overlook sometimes. Can't wait to see where this is going!

Perfect

I like your story I really enjoyed reading this story it is good you are a good writer who writes good stories

Aww what a wonderful story! It was very enjoyable and extremely well written. You reallygot inotothe characters' minds and showed us what they were feeling and thinking, their weaknesses and strengths. I like that you didn't rush things, you took the time to really build the story up. I also love the way it ended.

This was a magnificent chapter, you wrote it very well, putting the reader right into that scene. It was very well done.

I really enjoyed your fanfic. I've read a LOT of Poto fics, but none had make me fully understand how hurt he was after all her betrayals. I know he had his part, but I've never noticed how frightened she really was at admiting her feelings. And I liked the way you explore it, but they argued too much haha. Nevertheless, I also liked how both were so innocent (awwn). But after they've become sooo wantom (mwahaha). And he was so rich! I know he used to gain 20,000 francs, but a entire house AND a freaking theather! Dammit, was awesome! Thanks for sharing this beautiful fanfic. Don't stop writing plz :)

May I just say, you have the most beautiful writing I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I absolutely love descriptive writing, and your use of certain words have brought this story to life completely. You describe their emotions in such a way that the intensity washes over the reader, the passion of their touches is somehow expressed with words. I feel like an overexcited critic writing a positive review right now, but honestly this story deserves every ounce of praise. The vocabulary is fantastic, and not a single word is clunky. You did an amazing job and I look forward to reading your other works!

Hee-hee! I love how Erik's enjoying himself by turning their "Phantom" story into his own playground and puppet show! It's good to see that at least our poor Erik can amuse himself with their stupid play, because if anyone deserves a laugh, it's him. ;-)