I remember reading this when it first came out and absolutely loved it. Honestly to this day I still check back once every few months in the very slight hope that it’s been updated, haha.

Wow. Just found this and it’s a gem. Really good character development. Sad that it was abandoned

Lol, Anubis! That's what it is alright!

it's a shame he/she stopped writing I loved this story

Man this story was good

I was right when I had predicted that this story could become one of my top-5 favorites, maybe even top-3, because it most certainly has.
In the beginning of the story, when the first connections between Aaron, Kasumi, Haruka, and Hikari were made with Ash, Misty, May, and Dawn, I had thought the present day people to be reincarnations of the originals (I love Greek Mythology and PJO/HOO, and I've read a shit ton of it lately, so reincarnation, as something that is featured in such material, is up there with things that have been floating through my mind). Later on into the story, when I'd realized that there were was more of a connection between the two peoples, such as last names, I realized that they are likely descendants of the originals. Dawn is pretty much confirmed as being a descendant of Hikari at this point, but the others I'm taking off of gut feelings, I guess. Though, they could be both a reincarnation and descendant. . Then, I'd realized that this might give us our first insight into the parentage of Ash, with my theory suggesting that either Aaron himself is his father (I know that there is a difference of millennium, but there are stranger things than Time-Travel in the Pokémon universe), or at least Aaron is an ancestor of his. If I had had to put my money on one of the three choices (of being a descendant, a reincarnation, or both), I would have gone with simply being a descendant, but there seems to be more to it than that. With all of the visions of Aaron's life with Kasumi, Haruka, and Hikari, and the scene of the Legendaries talking about what could happen if Ash found out the truth of who and /what/ he really is before he's ready, and with a whole bunch of other stuff that I can't recall of the top of my head, I'm going to go with the fact that they are more than just descendants of the original 4, and are in fact also reincarnations of them (or at least something similar to that).

Overall, I absolutely love how the story is written. Of note is how I love how the harem isn't super cliche, and that there is actually development of the relationships and of the characters in general. You are an amazing author, and I sincerely wish that you had not abandoned this story (I've stated it previously, but I don't know for 100% certainty that you have, in fact, abandoned your stories, or possibly even FanFiction entirely, but it's what I've gathered). I can still hold out hope that you will eventually return to this story, or at least eventually start up a new story as you are an amazing author, and I'd love to see more of your work.

If I feel that I've missed something that I feel that I should have said, I'll add it into a review of a different chapter.

I know that there are only a few chapters left until the latest chapter, and that they've already been published and thus what I say in this review most likely will not change them, but I hope that Ash eventually uses his aura abilities in battle. Specifically, communication through aura is what I want the most. Sure, it's a pretty unfair ability to have, as more than likely Ash's opponent will not have the same ability, but the only complaints I've seen about such an ability being unfair is when it is performed by an Aura user, while the performance of the ability by a Psychic has next to no complaints (at least in my experience). Aside from that, using his Aura sight to see through visual hindrances, such as dust or smoke clouds, and alert his Pokémon to what he sees is also something that I feel that he should do. I do know that he isn't that proficient in his Aura sight, but it's just something for the future, if you ever pick this story back up (which I sincerely hope that you do).

So who all is going to be in the harem? I'm fairly certain that Misty, May, and Dawn will be, as they are kind of obvious, but will there be anyone else? Recently, Fireredshipping (Ash/Zoey) has been an interest of mine, and I'd very much like it if she were in it. I know that much of the story has already been written and published, but a guy can hope, can't he?

I forgot to add this to the end of my review of chapter 8, where I spoke about how this story could become one of my top favorites, but I was implying that I want you to finish the story. I've already stated that I'm pretty sure that this story has been abandoned, but I still would love it if you picked it back up. Sure, someone else picked up from where you left off, but I doubt that his pick-up of the story will be anywhere near as great as yours has been so far. It's nothing personal to that author, just in my experience authors who pick up stories from other authors are never as good as he original.

I know that as of right now, this story has been abandoned (well, I'm pretty sure, since I've seen someone else picking up from where you left off, and it's been so long since this story has been updated), but with what I've read so far, and from what I've read in the spoiler, this story could shape up to be one of my top-5, maybe even top-3 favorites. I've read hundreds upon hundreds of Pokémon stories, so that's saying something. Granted, not all of them are as long as this or as long as some others, but they don't necessarily have to be long in order to be my one of my top favorites.

This fic is pretty interesting. A little confusing at some points, but interesting. Too bad it hasn't been updated in three years. I hope you are doing alright and that this will be updated eventually. If not, thanks for your hard work.

Hey dude. I think four years is long enough to train in the mountains because your friends betrayed you. Lol, great story, and I'm going to say something every else is saying: UPDATE! Fyi this is great story, but bring back some emo! It gave the story character.

You are a disspointing us.

This story is no diffent then a Cloth znaruto fiction.

Enough with the Bullshit Harems. It would been more realistic if ash slept around with Single Women... However Harems are unrealistic.. An overused Vile Clithe that degrade Women.

Old Sound had a Intresting concept.. But you failed ash as a Scorned and bitter Individual

Like Being Vengeful and Bitter because his Charzard was Wrongly Executed by Lance... For Example it was not him Being framed banished that made Ash.. It was one of his innocent Lokemon being Killed that causes him to Snap.. Vengeful towards both the organization that framed him and Vengeful towards pokemon League For Wrongfully Accusing and Banishing him.. And Worse killing his Charzard... HIS PRECIOUS Charzard... All of his Pokemon is family to him.. And that will set Ash on the vengeance.. Ash seek to Destroy the organzation that framed him and Ruin Pokemon League Reputation... Ash is also out to kill Lance.. But will his Former friends convince him otherwise.

Ash is victim of the injustice and as a Tragic Result he has becomes a Slave to his own Hatred.

Ash renamed himself Red

It will take Massive Joint effort for everyone to bring back the Ash they Know and love.., Ash/Red is so far gone in his hatred that not even his Beloved pikachu that he stillcherishes is not able to convince Red/Ash to Stop his Vengeful Path.

Know Ash's Former Friends make a Joint effort to figure out who framed Ash and prove to the world that Ash was Innocent.. It is race against Time.. As His former Friends hurry.. Because they Do not want Ash to stain his Hands with blood.. If they expose The Curroption Pokemon League to the public,. Then they Know Ash will be satified enough with that. Lance and the Pokemon League Reputation will be forever Ruined.. But if they do not hurry and prove it in time Ash will Seek To Kill Lance out of vengeance.. But if they pull it off.. Ash will have no reason to attack the Pokemon League because if the world know the League punished ash despite knowing he was Innocent.. The league will forever be ruined and shamed... And Ash will find that even More satisfying.

Think about the ideas i, am giving you about Old Wounds Rewrite.

Please Respond and tell me what you think about The Old Wounds Rewrite request.

dead?

HollowMan, you prolix pile of plebeian pond scum, what the hell is wrong with you? Did you not say you would fix up old chapters? Were you not going to add material to chapter two? Why have you taken over a month to upload new material? Must I beat new chapters out of you?
Your writing is very enjoyable with it's realism and with how you portray Ash. However I do think that in the lastest chapter the development of Ash's dark aura could have been emphasized. Overall I find your story very enjoyable and would be willing to beat more chapters out of you.