Reviews for The Fools' Tournament
Dazion chapter 1 . 1/28
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,...
Smashgunner chapter 48 . 11/22/2019
Minato has been defeated by the mighty Achoo.
Guest chapter 70 . 11/20/2019
Seriously was evil Igor just a fanon trope in the P3 community that I am only noticing now. Heck I didn't realise just how spot on speculation that your Igor is essentially Yaldabaoth in characterization.

I wonder if this author ever tried to understand the velvet rooms origins or why all of its residents would qualify for the aeon arcana in a sense.
Guest chapter 66 . 11/20/2019
Wow your Igor comes across as completely ooc. For a second there I though this was a crossover of P5 and that was Yaldabaoth roll-playing as Igor.

Of course as I dive into the P3 fandom it seems a lot of people want Igor to be as malevolent as Yaldabaoth was, usually just for the angst.
garden rain chapter 2 . 8/26/2019
social link...so THIS is y they tryna sabotage each other? muy interesting and original concept. i like it. ima keep reading
Critic chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
Retarded, obnoxious characters? Check. A slut as the lead female. Check. A weakling as the lead male. Check. Stupid plot twists? Check. Overall dumb cast? Check.
This story sucks.
Guest chapter 21 . 3/12/2018
This fanfiction is complete garbage.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/4/2018
Why the interactions between Minato and the psp-exclusive protaginst are always cringy as heck?
Guest chapter 9 . 2/4/2018
Minato... of all people... getting a nosebleed?! I REFUSE to believe that. What's his courage and charm level in this story anyway?

The female protagonist is getting more and more annoying. I hope you won't try to ship her with Minato. I hate that pairing.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/3/2018
Eh? I thought Minato was supposed to ignore the psp-add-on female protagonist... with both establizing their own things? I don't like this development.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2018
I like how Minato has the upper hand over the female protagonist so far. Hope it stays that way.
Hunter of Entities chapter 67 . 8/4/2017
I am not going to lie Aigis' POV is amazing you'd be stupid not to love it.
Dash master 48 chapter 100 . 9/29/2016
I would like to see more of this.
Dash master 48 chapter 93 . 9/29/2016
What happened next?
sillyfudgemonkeys chapter 91 . 6/25/2016
Re-reading and bouncing around different chapters right now, and decided to skip ahead to the Ryoji/Death confrontation part.
And Ryoji's and Aigis' convo at the beginning isn't actually about Nyx, right? :'D It's actually foreshadowing for Hamuko/Minato's...uuhhhhh... "predicament" (I'm trying to be spoiler-free in case someone else is reading this). But, it's funny how Ryoji doesn't want to tell the fools' anything, but then spills the beans in the Bad End (man he must've been frustrated to have done that ;w;). XD
Also Hamu being all like "This doesn't make sense" man SOMEBODY is very much in denial... ;w;
(also with chapter 92, I know this is chapter 91 but might as well say it now since I'm here :'D) Ryoji's chapter about "I thought you'd be use to losing your memories" and all about the suffering Hamuko/Minato are going through is foreshadowing too right? :'D ;w;
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