Lol wow poor dawn!

I do ever so hope you're going to continue this

Oooh, do I sense a split personality that's been repressed? Psychologically, sometimes when a split pesona is present its because the person has suffered from severe trauma and the mind creates a personality that can handle the abuse our trauma without breaking. I like this idea. I can't wait for you to update. :) I can see Dawn getting rescued and getting psychological help after being toyed with by scarecrow. Eddie would be sent back to Arkham, and lo and behold Dawn winds up in A block cause her family fleshy want to deal with her. And in passing Eddie sees her again.

But...but...I want more. Like...lots more. Tons and tons more. Can't wait. I hope you have as much fun writing it as I am reading it! :D

I really love this story, it's got my fav trio in it! :D (Eddie probably my 1st fav though ;) )
Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter, it's getting exciting..

YAY! I'm just so happy! It's only 506 words...but I love it. Enjoyed it immensely!

Great story! Cant wait for an update :-)

Please please please make chapter 20 soon commin at ya 12/14/12! DA BOMB!

I'm really enjoying this story, please continue! :)

Still love this chapter hun. Do you still need help with the story Vive?

Mistress
XOXO

I'm still her :) please keep writing!

- Invisible-Ayla

I must say I really enjoyed reading your story! I just found it and read all 17 chapters, there really good too! I hope you continue and update soon! Your doing a very good job! :D

Ohhh! I like this story so far! It's very fun to read! But that's a bit
biased I admit. I love anything where the Mad Hatter get's a girl!
But NOT Miss Pleasance! I don't like her at all! Hmph! She refused a
man that would love her forever with all his heart! What a moron! :(
*sigh* But back to topic! I love yer story and hope to see more of it soon.
And if you need a new co-writer I'd love to help ya out Miss Vive! :D

The Mistress
XOXO

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
please? I really need to know what happens!

I am so Very in love with this story! If I'm not mistaken, you've just hinted that they can in fact influence the world they're in...But don't tell me! I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Your characters are likable and believable. A refreshing experience for original characters. Thank you for your wonderful story!