| Reviews for Duty of the Heart |
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Thunder Beagle chapter 9 . 4/15/2014 I rather like this. I'm always rather uncomfortable with using rape as drama, but you handle it more circumspectly than most so I think it's alright. Your grammar is pretty good too. There are a few instances of switching past and present tense and I believe you misspelled grammatical with gramatical the chapter before last, but nothing makes me want to gouge my eyes out. That's always nice. Also, wasn't Usagi's nickname supposed to me Usako, not U-chan? Hitting up Wikipedia right quick says yes, though that was Mamoru's name for her. Overall this is fairly interesting. Hope you can continue it someday. Thanks! |
kapuis chapter 1 . 3/27/2014 Good story. I really hope that you will continue this story. |
l1s44p chapter 9 . 12/2/2012 i really love it :) can't wait for next chapter |
figcube chapter 9 . 6/20/2012 I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the girls to go find another crystal. Update soon. |
qube chapter 9 . 6/18/2012 I loved it. Waiting for the next one |
Bin82501 chapter 9 . 6/18/2012 Brilliant. I love this story! |
Crystal chapter 9 . 6/18/2012 Wait a minute... Usagi has a Youma sealed inside her and she is a Priestess. Man...what a twist... Update SOON and thank your reviewers too! :-D |
figcube chapter 8 . 2/22/2012 I like where this is going. Setsuna and Saeko being a couple sounds cute. Please update soon. I love this story. |
qube chapter 8 . 2/22/2012 I wish it wasn't short. Keep going. |
Ariel Night chapter 7 . 12/22/2011 I LOVE this story! It's just so wonderful and emotional and realistic and dramatic and original. It's been a little while since you've updated though. I don't know if you have abandoned the story or not. I don't want to get my hopes up but I'm a little late. Update soon! |
qube chapter 7 . 12/5/2011 I liked it. You always make me want to read the next chapter. |
figcube chapter 7 . 12/5/2011 I like where the story is going. That explains Usagi's behavior two chapters ago. Love how you're using the rainbow crystals here. I assume Setsuna is going to get Uranus and Neptune. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Ami is mad about. |
figcube chapter 6 . 10/13/2011 I liked this. I do hope you explain how Usa and Hotaru know each other. And continue soon. I want to see how Usagi reacts to Minako. |
Bin82501 chapter 6 . 10/12/2011 I looooove this back story |
teufelchen29 chapter 6 . 10/12/2011 again a great chapter, I pleases me already about your next :-) |