Reviews for Sweet and sour apples
SammiLoves2Write chapter 16 . 11/29/2017
This was cute!
-Sammi
Hugz Kissez chapter 16 . 10/24/2013
Aww, so ADORABLE and CUTE and WONDERFUL I think I'm gonna die! Jk, I'm fine! Amazing story, allthepossibilities!
Hugz Kissez chapter 10 . 10/24/2013
OMIGOSH, MAJOR CLIFFY!
Hugz Kissez chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
What the fluff! Uncle Ade is Anubis! Omigosh! I did NOT see that coming!
drama4lifexoxo chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
AHHHH I LOVED THIS!
ninanathalia179 chapter 16 . 2/2/2012
Brilliant! SEQUEL? xxx
ninanathalia179 chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
Really good! Keep updating x
Katie not logged in chapter 16 . 12/27/2011
JKHJGAHFDKDHGJKLHGA

This was just so amazing!

Sorry I didn't review sooner, FanFiction STILL isn't sending me any alert emails!

But oh my god, this was great! I gasped and nearly sobbed in happiness when it got to the Eye of Horus locket part!

Okay, this is a crappy review...but I'll rave more about the amazingness via PM!

Great job :)

~Katie
Poiuyt chapter 16 . 12/23/2011
Hey! I love your fanfic! It's so awesome! And it has a cliffy at the end... Brlliant! I hope you'll do more HOA fics soon!
ReaderandWriterGirl chapter 16 . 12/22/2011
Yay you updated! this story is good continue :D

P.S I saw this story when it started and I thought I suscribed already! LOL me
TheHoAProtagonist chapter 16 . 12/22/2011
Aw, that was a nice and awesome ending. Love the whole story. See your fanfics on season 2, eh?

Heres ma que

~ Peace out
ral7224 chapter 16 . 12/22/2011
Wow! I can't wait for more! It's so good!
anubisfreak chapter 16 . 12/22/2011
love it !
c0uRt3n3y chapter 15 . 10/21/2011
LOVE THIS

CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF UR FANFICTIONS

*covers one eye *

SIBUNA
fabianrutter chapter 15 . 10/8/2011
For some odd reason, I didn't get the email alert for this new chapter!

I thought it was ADORABLE, Olivia! Your descriptive wording was great, and I liked that you made it Fabian's POV, not Nina's. I think it had a better...feel to it...

And I adore the "Aloha" concept of it all. Very creative and cute :)

Oh, and Sydney is very pleased with your dedication to her, I bet :P

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Katie
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