I'd loved to have had a chapter where we catch up with Janine and what happened to her, Rose looking at Lissa's wedding photos since she was being held captive during that time, and hearing from Lissa what everyone was doing to find her, including what Abe was acting like. Also how Dimitri got pulled back into the story. What he'd been doing to find her and stuff.

And what happened to Adrian?

Feels like that chapter might be at least one and maybe two more.

Freaking me out!

I adore Christian, he's such a great character.

I had PTSD from an attack on the job. I worked in a facility that housed adults with developmental disabilities, about 75 people lived there. Some of them were violent. I was attacked several times during the time I worked there.

I felt just like Rose did in this chapter, many times. I thought I was losing my mind. You did an excellent job on this chapter.

I really like this story.

Wowsa!

This was a great fic! Loved the twist! For a moment you got me there with Mason, than later when Adrian said "female" while massaging her feet (which I honestly thought you have triggered her...)
But Abe honestly was the last person I had suspected, for a moment I thought it could be Eddie as well, since Mason died in his house.
I loved all the tension and romance, you did incredible with it!
xoxoxo

This story is a fucking load of 's fucking tedious

well those are some extremely unprofessional bodyguards

I liked the potential behind this story... It has the potential to be great, but you either rushed through it or only gave it part of your attention. You also kept throwing out random plotlines that derailed the story and dropped story lines that you never picked back up. What happened with Adrian? They were dating and on a break up you never finished that. How was Dimitri there at the end? He was in Russia and you never explained. Those are just some examples. I applaud your effort though. It takers talent to write this.

Third time I've read this story Ms Bel and I really love it. I'm sure it was a really really tough story to write because of the content but it is amazing. you are an awesome writer I have always loved all of your work. thank you

more please love it

This story is all over the place I have no clue what the hell is happening

Please write more ur the best fanfic toon author I've ever had the pleasure of reading I hope u write more soon x

Holy Shit. This is one of the best stories I have ever read! You have some real talent!