| Reviews for Retrieval |
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Sherry843 chapter 21 . 8/28/2018 Any chance you would update again? I wish there're more! |
Sherry843 chapter 8 . 8/22/2018 An idea just comes into mind, it would be TOTALY (can't even think a adjective) if Jack's alias is John Reese. |
Sherry843 chapter 2 . 8/21/2018 Excellent! This is how Renee would have survived, very resonable. |
Roadrunnerz chapter 21 . 11/28/2012 Wow...Renee introspection! Pretty interesting to see her look back on all the turmoil (inner and otherwise) that brought her to where she is now. When she's looking back on her visit to Jack at the hospital kinda broke my heart. :( I've wanted to give her a hug since the first chapter, but I REALLY wanted to give her a hug in this one. If I didn't think the pain of it would kill her. lol And this, "That's the fleeting nature of gratitude for you" OMG...thank you for saying that Renee, 'cause I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to say that while watching the show! Seriously, they should name a holiday after the guy, not persecute him. Speaking of Jack, what's going on with him on the ship? *impatient GR* *smoooches* |
ghost141 chapter 21 . 11/18/2012 Awesome chapter as always! I really love that you're continuing filling the gap in Renee's story between day 7 and day 8, and you did an amazing job, especially in describing her thoughts and feelings during the time when everything seemingly crashing down on her. I love that you vividly described how "numb" and "lost" she felt after day 7's events, which, I think, really bridges the gap in turn of her character transition between day 7 and day 8. Please continue with the good work :) |
Lara Cox chapter 21 . 11/13/2012 Amazing chapter, as always. You made me cry once again. Please, update soon |
DieHardBrendan chapter 21 . 11/13/2012 Hmmm...Quite an emotional chapter there. Renee thoughts we're quite intense and sad. I just hope she'll get out of the hospital soon. Anyway, keep up with your good work. |
Roadrunnerz chapter 20 . 7/22/2012 Okay ASIDE from the continued torment of Renee, the ripped out arterial line (GDA!) and the lack of Jack (we need him back!) that was lovely. As always, because your writing is just...special. (and I mean that in a good way, lol) Really like the burgeoning friendship between Renee and Janis. SO glad Renee finally felt like she COULD confide in her. She needs a friend methinks. Especially since her only other one is an ocean away and on the run, and you know, doesn't know she's still alive... :) You rock. That is all. |
DieHardBrendan chapter 20 . 7/19/2012 Well, it was interesting for Renee having to deal with the aftermath of everything she went through. Janis is cretainly trying to reach out to her after what Renee did to her in Day 7 and that she found her when she tried to kill herself. Renee feels saddened by what Jack did after he thought she was dead and she is still tired during her recovery. I hope to read more soon. |
ghost141 chapter 20 . 7/18/2012 Again, amazing chapter! I really like the way you wrote Renee's inner thoughts. They are completely in character :) And the way Renee trying to figure out what Jack would do after he escaped from Logan's goons. It really shows that even though she had suffered through PSTD & gunshot wound, she was still a Federal agent at heart. Plus, the part where she slowly opening up to Janis again is also well-written. Please keep up the good work :) |
Lara Cox chapter 20 . 7/17/2012 YAY, you updated again! I'm so glad! I've been missing this story like crazy. I loved this chapter. It was very good, as always. Poor Renee, she's really miserable. Personally, I'm not very interested in Cole, because I'm not a fan of him. But that part was very well written. Cole must have so many emotions. keep up the good work and, please, update faster this time. |
Caiternate chapter 19 . 4/27/2012 Excellent chapter, as usual. It's always lovely to read your fic. I think you've captured the dynamic between Renee and Janis quite well. Can't wait for the next one! |
ghost141 chapter 19 . 4/26/2012 Awesome chapter as always :) Renee's interaction with Janis is really nice! I kinda wonder how will Renee react to the news concerning witness protection :P Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Roadrunnerz chapter 19 . 4/26/2012 I AM an awesome guinea pig, right? (Then again how many guinea pigs do you have in your life? ;) ) You know, biased as I am towards the Jack-on-the-tanker parts, I really liked this chapter. Really liked the dynamic between the two women and ended up feeling for both of them here. Janis who's just...trying so hard to do what she can for Renee, and Renee who's just so...frustrated and HAS to take it out on someone, and of course that happens to be Janis. By default, seeing as she's the one who's there for her. :-/ Methinks there'll be a real friendship developing between them before this is all over. And of course your details are just perfect. As always. Can't wait to see where you're taking this next. Hurry up, would you? (awesome IMPATIENT gp, that is) |
DieHardBrendan chapter 19 . 4/23/2012 That's a pretty good chapter with the Renee and Janis interaction since the Day 7 finale. Renee is still feels uneasy to be around Janis from what I read. Hope to see more of this story soon. |