What happened?

Oh. My. Gawd. Did you just make them blood brothers? In either sense of the term? *gets exceedingly odd mental image of Jotun!Thor* Anyways, Thor's little freakout was probably the best way to drive it home that yes, they are brothers and nothing Loki says or does will change that. By his own admission, Thor is no great orator. He's a man of action, so he has to ascribe to the adage "actions speak louder than words."

-crying-

Okay I'm done. -sniff-

The first half of the oneshot, when you are describing the Casket and its affect on Thor, was superb. Brava!

My only objection, is that Loki referred to Odin as "dad". It seems to me that the term is a bit too modern and human. I would think Loki would call him "Father". But that's me.

:)

Wow, just wow. This was really powerful. though I'm with Thor: what did he do?

This is kind of incredible, and I love it...A LOT.

I'm so sorry. My iPod had a little freak out moment and submitted my review before I was finished writing it. I apologize.

ANYWAYS, as I was saying before, I'm literally about to cry. That is how deep of a writer you are.

I especially love the end when Loki puts his hand on Thor's... That is what really made me tear up... Thanks for posting such a great story! Keep writing!

And sorry again for the whole review issue... Hope you aren't too angry. Maybe I should stick with writing reviews from my computer. Yes? Yes.

-Loki's Little Helper

OHH! This is so heartbreakingly adorable! So deep and well written... It stuns me. Really. Goodness, I think I m