I hope you finish the story

What... No no no no... You can't leave it like that please update omg thats shocking... Please update soon x.

I really like this story and your writing. It has been over a year since you last updated. Does this mean you will not finish or do you have it posted on a different website hopefully?

Such an amazing story. Their love is so adorable, but such a slow build. Haven't either of them realized that they are mates? I'm surprised that they didn't raise a big fuss over those cheating bastards with their disgusting, incestuous, and adulterous deeds to the rest of the Cullens. Bring the Golden Children down a notch off that pedal-stool that Daddy Carlisle and Mommy Esme's placed them on for once. Let them see their true colors and kick their prudish, snobby, and manipulative asses out. Or let Newborn Bella break out a can of woop-ass and leave the those Golden twins limbless with their heads buried in the La Push septic tanks for all eternity. (Perfect punishment for them, burn their bodies, bury their heads in super stinky, wolf poop forever, ha ha...maggots, worms, and icky things crawling on Malice and Doucheward's ever controlling and manipulative heads...ha ha...just kidding). I wonder if Eddie Boy would be able to read the minds of the bugs or animals, that would be hilarious. I was wondering why none of the Cullens have figured out why they left. And, the whole Charlie thing? It was a little OCC of Bella to forget about him, being the caring and overly selfless person she is. But really isn't she eighteen and capable of leaving, regardless of letting him know? I'm mean ya he will worry, but doesn't he think that maybe she just ran away? I'm surprised Charlie isn't stalking the Cullens and interrogating them over her whereabouts? So now are Jasper and Jake gonna fake her death? Did Jas stop on his own when biting Bella for her transformation? Or did Jake have to stop him? What about the Treaty? Poor Charlie, but I think he'll survive with the Pack, Billy and Sue Clearwater. (Unless they tell him what they, and what the Cullens are, with their biased, specist views, they'll taint Charlie away from Bella with fear and hate of what she's become). I really love this story and I really hope that you continue it. I'm dying to read about newborn Bella. I seriously hope you don't make her have instant control over all her new instincts, strength, and bloodlust, I really hate when authors do that, because it makes the story a lot less interesting and boring. Because the whole idea of being a vampire, is to have the amazing senses, strength, power, grace, beauty, and the whole living forever thing. The whole point, is to witness her struggle and see her awe and amazement through her eyes as she becomes this all powerful being and learns how to adapt and use her gift or gifts. Drama and chaos makes stories so much more fun to read. I hope she is an uncontrollable, bloodthirsty monster that submits to her sexyass mate (damn sexiest man alive/undead, Jackson Rathbone that is) only after wrecking plenty of havock. Maybe she should try living off Peter and Char's lovely diet of scrumptious criminals, instead of being a Bambie mucher/Bunny killer. Maybe, make her gift so powerful that animal blood makes her too weak and sick to survive off of it, forcing her and maybe Jas too, to become red eyed beautiful monsters, who actually accept who and what they are for once, unlike that joke of a family that is constantly trying to be something they are not, human. Maybe she could use her shield to keep Jasper away from her physically to not be able to stop her from attacking humans, maybe she no longer feels guilt like she's did as a human and refuses to be anything like the Cullens who betrayed her twice now. I'm surprised that Jasper hasn't suggested going to Peter and Char's house, especially now that she's changing. Major Whitlock is going to need all hands on deck when she wakes, with experienced newborn handlers. Well maybe Malice the Pixie Bitch would have "seen" that. Is that why? Why was Demetri attacking Jasper and mentioning something about an impossible distraction? I thought the almighty Major Whitlock would have came out and emotionally assaulted and brutally dismembered Demetri for threatening his mate? I thought he never lost a fight, yet the Tracker almost killed him and would have if not for Jake? We're the rest of the Volturi attacking the Cullens/wolves or something? Love, love, love this story, it is absolutely amazing. Please give us readers a juicy lemon or two so we can drool right along with Bella, over how beautiful Jasper is (he's the perfect ma meat, that we will unfortunately never get to have or hold, or consensual molest. Ha ha, just kidding)! Keep up the excellent work. I can't wait for your next update.

Love it! Please update soon I want to see what Rose dose to Alice and Edward.

great chapter

:)))

a great chapter :))

great chapter :)

a great chapter :)

great chapter

Keep up the good work

I like it... It was alsome... How does Bella reacted to being turn and does is Jake still friends with her after she turn? What will Aro do to them for one of his children of speaking was killed by them?

Wonderful!
Update! GOOD LUCK:D

wow cant wait for more hope you update soon :)