Pieces like this are easily the best part of Sekirei; the interwoven tales of romance and harem logistics making for compelling reading and comedy. The gifts, their reactions, and Minato's musings all tied together by the idea of togetherness.

Excellent work. Extra praise for the effect scene composition; taking each Sekirei and their gift in time-spaced sequences than trying to maintain a single chronological narrative works so much better here.

good

I really liked thess past chapters, as they were like a slice-of-life shorts filled with so much emotions and events. If I were to choose a favorite chapter it would the Fourth Feather, as it was the most emotion filled chapter. Not to mention that it was pretty long.

Now about the overall story, it was good. You pacing was proper and your choice of words and descriptive words even more so. But you might want to revisit your story as there were many parts were I felt that the sentences were either run-ons or fragmented. Other than that, this is an awesome worth rereading again and again.

I know it has been nearly six years since you last updated this, but I still hope that you will continue this.

Sneaky author is sneaky. I WAS SO SURE THAT IT WAS GOING TO BE A LEMON DAMMIT!

I am at a lost for words with how good you managed to convey their emotions, from anger, sadness, embarrassment, to happiness and excitement.

Bravo, author!

If Kazehana didn't fall completely for Minato after this then I don't know what will.

Also, THE FEELS MAN!

My favorite part of this chapter is while they were eating. The act and talked to each other like they were family, with Minato acting as the husband or father. Well, technically, he is! But for someone like him who is a pussy with absolutely no confidence to man up and face them, he is starting to be a man.

Homura is best tsundere confirmed. Jokes aside (not really) I really love how you wrote Homura's feelings, with her finally accepting who she is and her feelings for Minato.

Not a single one of these has failed to make me laugh my butt off. These are fantastic, and have inspired me. Thank you!

Narration attitude can sometimes make the story! It did well here with the silliness. At least I thought so.

And yes, I'm not afraid my own mind hit ailed it right to the gutter expecting at the least a massage.. At worst, a full body one... Lol.

Can't wait for more!.. Wait, there's one.. Only one more? Damn..

I couldn't help but find myself laughing loudly at many segments, with that old fashion awe, specially when he presented Kazehana's, musubi's and Tsukiumi's gifts to them.

Not to mention two thefts taking place.. Hope the MBI agent don't get fired!

The best stories evoke strong emotion, this one did it in spades. Tears flowed y the time I was half way through it.

Loved it. But he HAD TO OPEN HIS MOUTH about getting lost in the tunnels..

Cool chapter, both giving me ideas and reinforcing thoughts I already have gone through for his character. The one thing I've notice so far that nobody writes, is Homera ASKING Minato, who has the power over him, to make Homera what Homera wants to be.. Obviously your Homera here, either hasn't gotten that far or is trying to let nature take it's course.. ;)

Good job!

Continue it would be good to keep updating this