While I like the idea behind this, I can't really say I am enjoying it all that much. Your grammar is pretty bad to be honest. You mix past, present, and future tense in your words/sentences and you jump around way too much and even repeat some things by saying them twice just written differently.

To be frank, honestly speaking, I think you need to get yourself a proof reader who is a native english speaker. Since I get the impression, and hope I am correct, that you are not a native english speaker. Someone to go over your chapters and point out where you've made these mistakes so they can be corrected. As it is now reading this is a bit frustrating as I try and figure out what you're trying to say half the time.

man I hope this story ends with a semi-happy ending for Tsuna chan

Damn I already ran out of chapters XD Your story is so great, I got so caught up in it and read it all in one go. Your plot is so interesting and really just stands out in my opinion, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

so I was reading this while listening to build the moon by charlotte sometimes and it made me feel a lot of different emotions. First was sadness for tsuna since she (or he in canon) is my favorite character and I love her to pieces. so yea I cried :/ next was anger at the five that she loves and along the way I thought: "WHAT ARE YOU IDIOTS DOING? :( she's dying and none of you have found out and/or confessed your love for her that you don't even know exists (exception being takeshi) when you already should've found out how you felt ages ago! YOU'VE BEEN TOGETHER TEN FLIPPIN' YEARS AND SHE'S DYING! OH MY GOD JUST DO SOMETHING!" so yea like that e-e in the end all these jumbled emotions of mine conclude at: "you'll all regret it." I will so be there when they find out about tsuna's condition. cuz frankly, i'm pissed. haa, sorry about the possible rant/venting because good stories make me get emotional :'( argh those dummies

please update!

Yes I am looking forward to the next chapter and reborn tutoring her again. :)

OMG! I love it, and also the part where Elkei said to Mukuro, "Even a broken toy can be fixed." loved it. Kepp up the amazing work! :)

Wow. I think you just blew my mind.
I am officially in love with this story. I can't wait to read more... Update soon!
Tsuna is so badass here, lol. And as for pairings.. who will she end up with? Hibari? Enma?
Haha, I also adore Elaine and Mira. Bravo!

This story is seriously awesome! Oh gosh..it nearly made me cry...Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

I don't think Reborn should be 'tutoring' a girl with a chronic illness...especially when he doesn't know and shes not telling...although...don't the sun flames heal?

Please post again soon this is fun to read!

Poor tsuna is going to die and reborn is going to tort-I mean tutoring her again

Please add more

Nice chapter. Update soon please.

I really like your story. It keeps you on the edge and wanting more. Keep up with it!

don't worry you've done a great job! i was only taken aback by Reborn's sudden proclaimation it gives thrill tomy nerves keep going!

Awesome stuff!
Please keep up the good work