Wow! Wonderful!

Cool story!

I think this is my favourite Sherlock story so far. I especially enjoyed your take on Donovan, as well as Emma’s interactions with Sherlock and John. She seems the middleground between the Bakerstreet boys: feelings and reason combined. She fits so well that you can’t help but want to read more scenes with her in it. Amazing job! Thank you for writing this story!

Really enjoyed this chapter. Interesting take on Donovan; I'd thought the same myself about her character as she is clearly far more competent at her job than Anderson is at his.

I really like a good, meaty mystery in my fanfiction, and this is shaping up to be a lovely story. One thing I am confused about, though, is Jane Doe referring to John as Dr. Watson. I even went back and re-read the paragraphs from their arrival forward. No one introduces John or addresses him by his surname. How could she know John's surname then, and why didn't Sherlock notice this rather significant detail?

Thank you for this story. It was interesting and quite unusual. Emma was a nice character which fitted perfectly into the plot. Really liked the way how she deduced with caution.
Sadly, I'm tired and at a loss for words, so let me just thank you once again. I really enjoyed your story. :-)

lovely

Love that Angus automatically assumed Sherlock is John's. A few spelling mistakes and a sentence about the cab was repeated twice at the end.

All aboard the Johnlock train!

I see you making Jane interrupt John and Sherlock's flirting over pasta and I'm vaguely jealous and resentful. I'd like a bit more detail on the attempted murder because it was over before the adrenaline kicked in!

For your first fic, this is brilliant! Witty banter galore and I like how the story is developing. I feel a bit bad for John since he's been pushed to the side a bit with the arrival of fem Sherlock - but I hope to see more of him in the next chapter.

I liked this story very much, I read it in a couple of days before and after work. the ending chapter was also really cute

Magnificent, my friend! Absolutely satisfying and delightfully perfect in every way. So happy to have come back to this story and to find it finished. I love how Sally became instrumental in bringing the boys together. Emma became as real to me as John and Sher; Angus is the perfect big bear of a man for this larger than life woman. I really thought she'd turn out to be a therapist, and for the first few chapters, a sociopath. Loved how she saw John, because that's how I see him. Beautifully done!

I absolutely loved this story from start to finish! Probably going to read yet again soon...

This was adorable - just the right amount of wondering without too much overall angst. And Anderson got what was coming to him!