First things first

HARUHI IS THE GIRL KAORU IS HIKARUS BROTHER U IDIOT

ahahahahahah rich bastards ha

Holy fuck, such great writing. It flowed so well and I was captivated. And now I feel dirty, but oh well.

I loved this, holy crap. the way you described the smut was beautifully done.

You did well here, no need to be so self concious. Good fic, nice and hot, and in character. However, I'm not sure why you felt the need to include the drugs at all. Haruhi likes it, she comes back for more, so why on earth were the drugs needed a second time? I really didn't think she needed any convincing after the twins were touching her and clouding her mind with their touch, that alone would have been way hotter.

This is the best smut i have ever read! And i have read a lot. i think you should write more. your good at it.

WE LOVE IT! Please make more soon! Best story ever!We will for sure continue reading! For 16 and 17 year old girls this is truly AMAZING!Keep writing! 3 ;)

good story

This is an interesting fic, interesting in a good way I mean... Haha... The multiple ands were a little annoying but besides that all right... Continue write smutty stuff...

WHY DID IT TAKE ME SO LONG TO FAVORITE THIS?! I read this some odd years ago, and always break my neck trying to find it again, and GOSH! This is long overdue!

I like this...

OMG I HATE IT THIS IS SOOO NOT MY STORY!

Love love loved it

For your first smut, this is so good haha. Really. There were a few grammatical errors here and there but regardless, I really enjoyed this! You have an awesome writing style!

It was writen well but its quite depressing that she cant seem to get away

I was going to read this for science, but then I read the author's note and it told me pretty much everything I needed to know.