Oh god, was very different but a great take on.

I like it.

Lady F

So sad! :( At first I thought Sirius was the narrator, for some reason... M, so much more to say, but I can't translate it. :) Good job, anyway. (And sorry for the poor English...)

I like this fic. This is the first I've found that, like me, pondered a SB/LE relationship.
Uozumi

bittersweet; you brought Sirius' emotions across very well...I loved it:)

great fic...unlike any i've ever read before. and it's very short, thankfully. i never have much patience for the multi-chaptered ones, much less the ones with sequels and sequels-to-the-sequels. anyway, as i said, your story is great. my heart breaks for sirius. one thing though. harry could never have been sirius' child, because of the...uh...tiny issue that is...sperm. that's all. keep up the good work!

Are you ever going to post more on this story i've been waiting for EVER! Please please write more and soon!

BRAVO! This was really good. I have to go read some more of your stuff now. BBL!

Ms. Padfoot

OMG! that was extremely sad! i feel so sorry for him! when i first started reading, whether you intended it to sound like that or not, i thought it was james saying how lily left him for sirius! but then when it got to the wedding part i knew it was sirius talking! OK, now that i've gotten that out, POST MORE! please? pretty please? with a cherry on top?

AHHHHHHH! THIS IS SO GOOD ITS BURNING MY EYES! AHHHHHHHHH!

That was good... I usually don't read James/Lilly stuff, but that was good

wow what a twist. i thought it was harry and ron and hermione but i was wrong. very good

aaaw, poor sirius. he's suffered so much. oh well. good story. good work. *pat on back*

aaaw, poor sirius. he's suffered so much. oh well. good story. good work. *pat on back*

aaaw, poor sirius. he's suffered so much. oh well. good story. good work. *pat on back*

I'm going to cry now. That was baeatiful.