This story was so next level and exactly just what the name suggested Raw as hell, I was so enthralled from beginning to end...that it honestly left me wanting a sequel lol. I'm normally not to type to fall for stories with multiple lovers as the authors may sometimes show character bias, or the intimate moments would usually be forced and non really consensual on top of the forefront of my mind telling me that In the end the main character usually only has one choice as in one person to spend their life with so it makes the whole journey kind of pointless but you really delivered with this story it was literally sex in a stick with beautiful intimacy.. there were a few things that I feel need to be addressed though for personally...I was a little annoyed that Jacob gave him self completely to Paul when in retro spect I felt like it should have been Edward I mean he was the first one to show any genuine interest and he was the one the basically created the story plus Edward as far as the original saga was known for being a virgin so I felt like it would have have been nice to have them come together first and then maybe paul after especially since Jacob never even really looked at Paul in that way initially to begin with by over time I got over her idea because honestly the Cullen brothers would all force them selves on Jake borderline raping him where as Paul was a pack memeber and gave Jake a choice in when and what he wanted to do plus I was never big on Jake and Paul pairings but I got over it and accepted it for what it was... I felt like Jacob didn't completely come clean when telling Paul everything he completely skipped over the fact that he never had feelings for Paul that he was literally just an excuse an after thought to hide a secret...I'm sure that would have crushed Paul even further but that part of the truth never came out as important as I felt it was to the very plot, I never had any ill sentiments go jake through the story as this was basically embrys fault that butted in and stuck his nose where it didn't belong...I won't lie before the epilogue I was a little annoyed I didn't like that the Cullen brothers were reduced to be nothing more then "curiosity" or labeled as such when their were times that Jake just wanted to be held by them and embraced by them so it may not have been love be he did like them I personally just didn't like that they were reduced to such a simplistic word, I was also annoyed at Paul during the big orgy scene where he cut in not even allowing Edward to get off from Jacob (who may I had showed interest in Jake first) and then after sex had the nerve to say that his curiosity for the Cullen's should be gone yet he was in control and didn't allow them to do what they wanted to get the complete "curiosity" out of his and maybe the Cullen's systems...I expected Paul to come in later on but more so adding rather then taking away so although gang Whole scene didn't play out the way it should at least in my mind I liked that the epilogue cleaned it up to where it allowed all of them to enjoy each other with out the jealousy and monagamy of it all...I thourougly enjoyed this story though different from what I would normally read but glad I gave it a chance thanks for the journey and I hope to read more of your work. ;)

THIS story was amazing! I loved every second of it, every word had me on edge! I don't typically read a lot of lemon-infused fics but this has an exceptional mix of naughty bits and storyline! Fantastic job! You actually inspired me to continue with a fic I have in the works with hopes of posting soon! Cheers! I hope the years have been good to you as a writer!

Xo
-Ajisai

Sooo... I was kind of excepting this but then again I wasn't. Maybe I wasn't sure of what to expect. I had a feeling of what would happen and I am glad I was a little wrong. Now I love this even if it had a lot of smut. I just really liked this.

I know this story is complete but I just have to say, hook ,line and sinker on this prologue. I want more! :D I'm so excited to read this fic!

Yeah! I loved it there were times i cried and times i was just so pissed, but i'm glad this is how you decided to end it because i thought Paul was going to leave Jake on the beach and then Jake was going to be broken and possibly commit suicide or end up with the Cullen's.

I love this storie please tell me there's more to cone I hope you make a sequel to this one maybe somebody get pregnant maybe somebody will get married something's gotta continue with these by young man

Can you please please please make a sequel? So good, I couldn't stop reading!

Oh I liked that! More escapades with those boys please!

A HAWT sexapade fic! Awesomeness :-)

Wow this was a really cool, I've never read anything like it! Please write more stories like this!

3:49 am and I'm done...who needs more than 3 hours sleep after a good read ;)

That was sweet but I want more vamps.

OMG...Jacob must be so fucking confused after what just happened.

That's adorably adorable! A perfect 4 some! Ne, what if Jake gets pregnant? Will he ever give birth to their children? Polygamia? Sequal please! Just amazing they're all great canidates for Jake!

Sweet mother of god,
this fic of yours is amazing. can't stop squealing...hyperventilating.