NOOOOOOO

RULE OF THUMB FOR FRIENDS:
JUST BECAUSE YOUR FRIENDS ARE PUMPED TO DO SOMETHING, DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE TO DO IT TO MAKE THEM HAPPY. ESPECIALLY IF YOU HAVE A BAD FEELING ABOUT IT

Wooooo, I'm enjoying it! I love ferriswheelshipping! I'm excited to see how this all plays out! I'm ready for the next chapter! Yayyyy, Kitty out!

Awwwww N, I am charmed with me, it is so pretty, I wait with anxieties for the near chapter.

Jajajaja, I delight the chapter, and if that Percy had reason

Yaaaaaaaayyyy! XDD

Woow, incredible, I am charmed with me.

Very interesting

LOLs

Why did you stop writing this? It's pretty good, and it's rare that we see White with the starter that's the best: Snivy. (Emboar and Samurott end with 528 base stat total, lower than all other fire and water starters, whereas Serperior also at 528 is BETTER than all other grass starters)

RESUME PLEASE!

This is an amazing story! I need to read more! It's so interesting and Percy makes me laugh!

you should definately continue this! it's so funny.

i absolutely love Percy's attitude! Snivy's are my favorite!

Nowadays is one word, weird enough o.O
I enjoyed reading this 8D good work!

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Very lovely story you have so far! I just had to put it in my favourites. I was excited when I saw you chose Snivy for Touko in this fic, for many people choose Oshawatt for her. Snivy's deffiniitley my favourite though. I also like how you gave a little background for N in the second chapter and could the window creeper be him :O? Plus, I love the fact that you have given each pokemon she has a different personality, you don't see that in many fics. Lastly, dear gosh those trainers! Some really are so annoying! I find that its a little creepy how most stand on the routes unmoving xD.

Yes, I know I have written a lot, but I truely am excited for this fic. Update when you feel you can and good luck with whatever the 'real world' throws your way :]

why oh why am i addiected to these fics i pray to hyrule n.m dosent see this. but that aside very good i was not a fan of tutorial. but i love the pokemons atitudes you put it down perfectly just as i whould think lillypup is a puppy patrat is a parinoid sodier and snivy is a know it all. and if you be so kind whould you posibly throw a tf2 fan a bone? scout saying “boink” whould make me nerd-blast out of epicness XD

bless your face if you sneezed during this coment bless you peace off

Hello,hello,

I almost cried when I say that there were no more chapters to read...

No, seriously.

Anyways, I really love everything about this story, and how it has elements from the game that people overlook or don't include in their story. I also like how Touya is Touko's older brother and how his is (I'm assuming) traveling with Iris.. or whatever her name is. XD

It's a really great story, and I simply adored the end of this chappie!

Alwyas,

Lazybutt