it was so sad...

Oh my god. there are actully tears in my eyes. this is so good! is there a sequeal? my god i have read stories 40 chapters long and none are as touching and beautiful as this one chapter. Wow is all i can say.

Nadesico

PS i'll be looking out for the sequel

That is such a sweet fan fic, I love it!

now i'm going to cry! this was really, really good. you have a great talent for writing, you should do some other stuff. i write in school all the time too! paying attention? *blinks* wait, what?