Ok, I’ve lost my heart somewhere and I can’t find it anymore. I probably dropped it somewhere near “Dad”.
Can’t wait to see what the reactions will be to the news. Hope Minerva’s going to be the first one to know. She suspected something, didn’t she? That Albus could have a secret child or something? I kinda remember Albus saying something along that line at the beginning of the story :thinking:
I want more! I will never have enough of this story!

The last part is so sweet...
Such a tense and comforting chapter. The fight scene is very cinematic. Can't wait for the next to see the two Dumbledore's story!

I look forward to the next chapter

I don't think Tobias was trying to redeem himself. I think, crap father that he always was, he reacted to a threat to the only child he had.
I'm looking forward to everyone's reactions to the revelation of Severus and Dumbledore's relationship.

elegant sentimental! sad but beautiful that makes me touched.

This is an automatically generated review based on Maliumkin's usual appreciation of this author's stories.

This review is automatically generated because of the following: the reviewer could not resist opening this fanfiction update and will not admit it.

She loved it and will sleep nicely.

I look forward to the next to see what happens next after this cliffhanger.

Loving it

Jesus! No! Merlin’s beard!
You mean, mean person !
As always... perfect!

Worth waiting a bit longer for ;) I hope you don't reach the end of this story to soon. Thanks again... Love to read you soon

All the father figures in one place. Too bad only one of them is worthy of the term. Voldemort should realize that messing with people's kids tends to be a tactic that works badly for him.

I can't believe he actually protect Tobias...
Thank you for the chapter!

OMG Go ALbus, beat him! you made a mess, go and fixed him!
And Tobias is an idiot, complete moron.
Meh, of course he knows nothing about how much in danger Sev is or how brilliant.
Anyway, come on, Voldemort need to pay for his wounds! with blood.

Beat him.
Albus gooooo! He's threatening your son and want to kill him! Damn it.
Btw you screw it up too so you fixed it too

I just realized I skipped reviewing this chapter. I'm sorry. Being very busy at work lately. I loved the chapter, of course. I love any chapter of this story. And Albus' behaviour really makes me unconfortable. I want so much to see them happy together but that bad feeling about Albus is still there. Hope I'm wrong.