I have to tell you how anticlimactic that ending, middle, and beginning was after reading the intro

I got this suggestion, it might get like a lot of reviews. How about Ciel finally went to college, he got paired up (dorms) with his erm.. old enemy? Alois, they usually fight, (lets make it one bed no? :D) When they went to bed, they were arguing about who gets the couch or not, and Alois tells him to just get in the bed and er well stuff happens? Well, that's all I got.

I liked this so much!
I hope you'd start an Alois/Ciel fic tho
Thanks :)

Exactly the same as my advice for Strangers With Candy. Summary rating seriously looks like it's centred around smut.
But anyway, once again it's SO GOOD. O.O
I'm not even gonna bother anymore, just... You're amazing. Really. I don't even.
(Don't ever give up writing)

Awesome story! I love the ending, I just wish there were more chapters. *sobs* Anyway, loved it!

Just to tell you I haven't really read a lot of modern day kuros. Well the idea hasn't really appealed to me. But you my good sir/miss did an amazing job. This is pure genius! Just the description and plot blew my mind so to speak. It was amazing and you deserve all my unsaid praise because that would take too long to type. So it's there but just not said. Loved it!

Although I'm not an Alois/Ciel fan, I really liked this. It was awesome. Great job.

Dammit Sebastian! Taking Alois's spotlight. There isn't nearly enough Alois love in the fanfic world so when little gem like this appear, I get all giddy like a school girl... Or Alois finding the perfect pair of booty shorts.

Anyway, I really liked how you portrayed their relationship. And how you melded their pasts together to make it angsty, but not over the top. Just right. I'd die if you wrote more Alois stuff. [I know you have him in Inertia Creeps and all] I would draw you art or something if that helped. LOL

Keep writing amazing things!

Ooooh! That was really good! I loved all the angstyness and just how awesome it was! XD

You do modern day Kuro oh so very well!

Chir x

I demand a sequel!

A sequel with kissing!

Kissing with tongu- *bricked*

But really, this was great. I love how you've written Alois, especially - and it'd be super awesome if you wrote a sequel. I'm in need of some serious BL-ing after this. *dabs at brow* So intense.

NEL, YOU FINALLY DID IT! AHH, I'M SO HAPPYYY!11 When I got the e-mail I didn't recognize the name or the summary of the fanfic and I was thinking "Did I subscribe to a AloisXCiel story like that? Doesn't sound like the AloisXCiel I read in . It sounds more like... Wait a second! *sees who the author is* MY FANFIC! It's finally here! I should be working on my stupid art project right now (a still life painting, acrylics... Blergh, I'm bored of it. I want to draw something fun (like Klaus and Dorian)! I hate painting!) but who cares? My Nee-chan finally uploaded my fanfic and THAT TAKES PRIORITY OVER ANYTHING ELSE!

Okay, I'm so happy that I'll review this while I read... And I'll read it from the beginning, so a lot of the fangirling you've seen before!

By the way: "Alois being Alois times ten" Yep... I know you really took it up to eleven in this fanfic. XD (by the way, saw two Alois yesterday in the event!)

Oh yeah... Here is the beginning of the Gore. XDD Alois always gives Ciel so much trouble, doesn't he? But that is why we love him. XD I love the way you describe the scene by the way. It's so detailed and... well... descriptive (XD) I can picture it perfectly in my head.

Randall, Randall... When will you learn that against Ciel Phantomhive, you can never win? XD By the way, stop thinking nonsense, you are great with dialougues! it flows so naturally and everything is so in chatacyer... I can even picture Ciel's smirk as he says every line you wrote. XD

I love the message Alois wrote. XD I don't know why, but I love it! I guess it just shows how much thought you put into every detail of this fic, even the dead guy whose guts ended up on the nice white carpet. XDDD

OF COURSE HE PREFERS CIEL!1 He needs his uke,. right? XD Thought in this fanfic Ciel is Alois's uke. XDDD

And Sebastian is being a creepy human. XDHe and the Understaker would indeed be marvelous friends. XDD

"Go to Hell" - Oh the irony. XD

I'm not sure if I told you the first time I read the beginning of the story, but I just love the part where Sebastian wakes up Ciel with the cat. XD And to make matters worse he keeps talking and talking... XD Oh Ciel, you should have brought your gun. Thought I doubt that would intimidate Sebastian... Maybe a dog? Pluto would serve fine for the job! XD

By the way, have I ever mentioned how much I love your writing? I swear if you do not write a book Nee-chan I'll use my uke powers to punish you! It would be such a waster of talent! You can't throw it away!1! Your writing is magnificent, I could read it all day long!

I can picture Ciel right now in my head... I know he is suppose to look strong, and he does, but... But I can't help it, I want to hug him so much! CIel is so cute! XDD ANd I can only imagine 21 year old Ciel... I bet he is hot. XDDD Does he have long hair? shoulder lenght perhaps? *-*

And here are two of my favorite lines of this fanfic. XDD Poor Alois, Ciel is denying him of his lover... So mean!

""Tell me where," Ciel ordered low beneath his breath, words a veritable growl.

Alois' lips curled up into a genuine smile, and sometimes it was his most genuine smiles that were the scariest.

"Let's go, Ciel. We waited ten years for this – ten fucking years. It's finally our turn!" he laughed, voice quivering almost hysterically. His hands fastened around Ciel's arms tightly, his eyes imploring.

" - Can I just tell you how perfect this small passage is? Besides getting the characters perfectly you managed to create the mood of the scene and everything with only a few words! I mean, it's just so perfect! From this passage alone the reader can tell how long the two have known each other, how they both desire revenge to whatever had been done to them, and how Alois is doing everything not only for his sick twisted pleasure but for himself and Ciel. And you can tell Ciel is slowly losing his compusure by the way he demanded the location of them. He wants to go along with Alois,but is conflicted! Nee-chan, you are an amazing writer!

Killing them isn't fair... I bet Ciel wants them to be locked away forever. Not because he has a problem with killing but because killing would be too mercyfull. He wants them to sufer. He wants them to live each long and agonizing day without freedom, lcoked inside a cage with nowhere to go, nothing to do but rot and wait their slow end. Ciel wants them to suffer as they did when they were stripped away from their freedom, right?

I knew this was going to happen because you told me but... DAMN IT SEBASTIAN!1 WHY!

Sebastian felt proud... hum... Yeah, I know we are talking about Sebastian and Ciel here, but it still is VERY creepy. XDDD Which is awesome, 'cause I love creppy! DDd

Ciel kinda of loved Alois? Hell no, Ciel Loves Alois! HE damn right love our blonde psycho1 XD

This is turning out ten thousand times better than I originally thought!

Oh my God, Alois alone in the cell is breaking my heart! Don't worry Alois, Ciel is coming! (Alois... Ciel... Together almost sounds like Ancel. XD_

Perfect ending! Nee-chan, this was so much better than anything I could have imagined! I'm so happy! I don't even have words to describe it! Man, it was jsut amazing!1 I love the ending! Alois and Ciel will now continue playing the game, and Ciel got over his fear of getting his hands dirty! Perfect story Nee-chan, you impressed me like always!

Holy freaking crap.

I can't even begin to describe how much I adored this story in every way possible. Seriously, I can admit that I'm pretty much a gooey pile of fangirl mush right now.

Everything about this fic was just perfect. The characterization, first off, made me such a happy reader. It's so refreshing to read a fic where I'm not cringing every other line of dialogue, something that is so common in fics with Alois in particular, I might add. And your Alois was so spot on. He had just the right mixture of sadism and insanity along with his emotional brittleness and need for affection. You really pulled off Ciel/Alois without making the relationship seem OOC for either of them. That in itself makes this fanfic beyond awesome.

The entirety of this fic caused me emotional whiplash everywhere, and I mean that in the good way. I adored Ciel taunting Randal and getting him to leave so he could thoroughly investigate himself. Very Sherlock Holmes-esque! I also enjoyed Ciel and Sebastian's relationship. Even when the positions are switched and Sebastian is above Ciel, they still have a way of one upping each other, not to mention Sebastian still serves Ciel. That made me laugh. Their banter was perfect.

Have I gone on enough about Alois? Wait, let me tell you one of my favorite lines;

"You can't get someone so excited then stop. It's been a whole year, Ciel! Y'never heard of blue balls?"

I died laughing. That was just... god. XD

I can't get over how much I love the scene between Ciel and Alois wherer Ciel is trying to convince him that the men would suffer more in jail rather than being killed on the spot. Ciel was soft in his own way, something that clearly only could have only developed over time and that was just... gah. And Alois's final line before the police dragged him away broke my heart. You could feel HIS heart breaking.

But then Ciel busted Alois out, so~

God, you always right the best AUs, you know that? This fic is a new favorite; I'm definitely going to end up reading this 94239042 more times now. Besides the plot and characters and content, your overall writing style has always been something I enjoyed. There's that underlining hint of sarcasm that laces the entire story that is just fantastic. I love it.

I sincerely hope you write more Alois/Ciel. It'll be unfair if you don't - of all the fics featuring these two together, you're one of the few who can portray them well and not OOC. Seriously. I can't applaud you more on that.

Great job. I love this fic. Please keep writing more Kuro! :)