Wow that's one of the best stories I've ever read! realistic and deep and you have such an incredible writing style! Please continue

More please!

Oh my god, i loved it, keep going

update please..and get the chapters edited...you have so many grammar mistakes in there that i had to reread whole passages to get to know what you were talking about...please do something about it?!

I wish u would've finished this story...
But I honestly really loved it. Thank you for writing it so well and posting it for people to read. I know u wrote this a long ass time ago, but it was awesome. Good work.

Powerful and yet sad at the sametime.

LOVE IT AND UPDATE

Reread the whole story to refresh my memory. Still brings me to tears. Hopefully, you will get your muse back, I would really like to read how it ends.

i love it i want to read more and see what happens to Ritsu and I hope that Dante guy dies hope you write more soon.

This story is so intense and sad. I can actually imagine the fanfic like a movie . so romantic, caring, and sad as well. Hope you'll update soon

I absolutely love this fan fiction. There's usually not many good ones with someone going after onodera. I truly do hope you continue with this one. I just cant get enough of it. and if you need a good song to help get the juices flowing that would be a good one for Dante then I suggest my bloody valentine by good charlotte I think it is. It would definitely fit him perfectly especially with him having a gun now. Hope this gets up dated at some point. love from a crazy yaoi fan with thanks

Continue please! Finish the story please I beg of u! I'm dying here!

Please update!

Please update this xx

This is just truly perfect...funny & sad
Thank u for writing this:...pls continue