AAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!

the beginning was SO confusing. and there were several mistakes. i didn't understand when hermione first came in through when hermione said he was going to the great hall with her. the rest though was SO AMAZING. I think just work on fixing the little things and maybe adding more detail in the middle and it would be 100% better :)

also, the prison thing could weave through the story a bit. since its the title. i figured it would have a bigger part and be more metaphorical. i hope this helped. and i really did like your story :) it was sweet how ron was so pleased with their relationship at the end. (:

alloy-za

ahh! that was so sweet. glad to see you getting back in the hang of it. Happy early birthday.

this is so sweet:) i loved it!

This is so sweet :) So romantic XD Really good! :D

The only fault I can pick is a small typo near the end- Ronald would say 'Mum' not 'Mom' because he's English :) But everybody makes mistakes, it's no biggie :)

Nice story!

I can't wait to read more soon!

I like to write about Harry potter too

you should check out my new story

and review to give me some feedback on it!

I would love to hear what you think about it after reading your story!

Great job again!

"Girlfriend?" Ron felt himself grinning.

"Unless they've changed the language Ron."

~~Lol! Best part, right there. :D