Hi!

This was so beautifully written, darling; I love how he was so tormented in it, yet he didn't let that interrupt his drawing of the unicorn. This was just so nicely put, along with the continual mention of things that were evidently still haunting him manifesting physically as well in the scar.

Also, the last line was gorgeous, with the thestral and...oh, dear, this was so nice to read!

Vicky xx

I loved this idea actually, and I totally want to try this. Instead of being disappointed by the fact that it was short, it made the imagery and ideas stand out clearer, while still being abstract. Good work my friend!

i LOVE those lyrics!

Luna and rolf dancing in the rain. love.

AHHHHHH! You know how I love Egyptian mythology! Beautiful!

k, so I love the imagery in this. So beautiful. "Love me?" :)

This was a perfect, perfect, perfect ending to this wonderful collection!

It was really beautiful, and Luna's happiness put a huge smile in my lips! "She waves at the birds on rooftops, smiles at every passing stranger, and invites the world to share in her joy" &hearts

I've enjoyed reading this so much, your descriptions are wonderful, your language truly fantastic, and your characterisations great!

Thanks for writing this amazing collection!

I think this was really gorgeous; the song was perfect, and again it was so beautiful! (Gosh, I'm repeating myself sooo much, aren't I?)

Lovely!

Oh. My. Gosh. This got to be the most perfect proposal I've ever read! So so adorable and sweet, and so /right/!

Loved this: "But Luna's content to be the gleaming bronze of Rolf's hair, and Rolf is happiest in the shimmering pearl of her smile." it was wonderful!

So Luna. And so perfect, really heartbreaking and beautiful and somehow bittersweet!

I loved the last and first lines really much!

How perfect. This was exactly like Luna - and how I imagine that Rolf is, so it was amazing!

I also loved the stylising of it - the hints of freeversing, you know ;)

Lovely, really lovely! And so sad, in a way, I adored that it was set in the battle! This was simply wonderful - and I think the song fit perfectly!

Oh my. I think this one is my favourite so far! (and not only because I love that song and you used it amazingly!)

It was simply beautiful - I can imagine it so well, and you'd written it adorable!

Wonderful, again! This scentence: "she may float ever above him, what goes up must come down and he will always be there to gather her together" - it was so beautiful, so /right/, I really loved this one!

This one was a bit sad, I think, but perfect nevertheless! I loved the simpleness and bluntness of Luna's statement, and once again it was all beautifully written!