I'm gutted I only just found this story and it ends at such a good cliffhanger. It doesn't seem like you'll be coming back to this story either but I will always value your characters' realism! I enjoyed this a lot!

I really love the intellectual match up between Hermione and Tom Riddle, especially with the time travel element working in Hermione's favor. I generally prefer to ship Hermione with Draco Malfoy (especially a very bratty, immature, emotionally-controlled, evil, yet confused Malfoy which is how I picture his true character). While Malfoy is definitely not an idiot, there's something so satisfying about seeing Tom Riddle get thrown off by Hermione's intelligence. Time travel fics are absolutely the best for this pairing because Hermione then has the edge of foresight over Tom Riddle and I truly think he WOULD be curious about a Muggle-born like Hermione who is intelligent, seems to know too much, and doesn't fall for his manipulation instantly and seems to be on guard around him. You continue to impress me with your realistic characters! They haven't done anything that seems too far-fetched at all and the plot is actually so interesting too.

I love the way you have Tom casually bring up pieces of Hermione's memories here. It's a seemingly casual yet totally calculated move on Tom's part and it's absolutely in line with Tom Riddle's real character. Really enjoying this story, this was a like a secret gem of a find on Fanfiction honestly.

This was an amazing chapter; the darkness of Tom is finally revealed in a completely realistic way. Your characters don't feel out of character at all. I've already favourited this story but I thought I'd come back and leave reviews too.

One of my favorite Tomione stories. I hope you will finish the story one day! Please!

I know it’s been five years already since the last update, so is there any hope of the story concluding? I just recently found this fic, and it was almost impossible to stop reading. So, I’ll keep my fingers crossed and stay on the lookout for an update, because this story is just too good to forget about

I'm so in love with that story. I stumbled upon your one shot collection by accident and I was enthralled by your beautiful writing style and how you write the characters that I started checking out your other stories. And I'm so glad I did. I really hope you will finish this story at one point. For now it gets a follow and fave

~ Hoozuki

I have re-read this story twice now and although I'm not certain if you'll actually read this, I have to let you know that I still love this story, your characterisation and your writing style - I hope that one day you will continue this because I am dying to know how you have pictured the ending!

luv this story.. i just discovered it actually. i wish it wasn’t abandoned. you probably haven’t even looked at these but pls update ! this is too good a story to just let go of :)

I love your story. I really hope you decide to return to it as soon as you are able. I am new to the whole TR/HG ship but it really has something, and your fic has a unique take on it that I truly enjoy! I am really glad I have started reading fan fiction again, because missing out on this story would have been a shame (seriously it's been over 10 years since I've been on this site).
You have a wonderful writing style, and I hope to see an update from you soon. Or if you have moved on to writing professionally I would love to read that too, so just let me know what books I should be looking for! Thank you for the time you have spent writing this story! And I am still hoping for more!

Love this story, so sad it seems abandoned. Going to follow just in case!

This is great!

Muchísimo muy interesada me dejó tu historia, tiene una trama que te engancha, muy buenos dialogos, me encanta que a pesar del interés de Riddle en Hermione su personalidad no cambio ni se hizo empalagosa como sucede en otros Tomione, en verdad espero con el alma que regreses y puedas concluir la historia, porque por más que trato no puedo imaginar cómo va a terminar.
Saludos y besos.

So good!

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