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   Lylex96 chapter 13 . 8/3 Oh please continue soon! |
| Sarahburch chapter 12 . 8/10/2018 Plz update |
| Heartsofbooks chapter 12 . 10/2/2017 So far I love the story for some reason a part of me is hoping for Violet to get pregnant that way that pinch more drama as well as babies sunny hopefully going to get better kind a like in the original story of how they are always packing and leaving trying to get away from Olaf not Orem but I'm a huge ship of Olaf and violet so that was a very pleasant surprise .so far I love it and I hope that you'll update the story soon it was worth the wait to find that next chapter and reading it this is a good story very light very good kind like white chocolate . |
| Amazing chapter 12 . 8/27/2017 Please update soon. This is wonderful. |
| lilyflower101 chapter 12 . 4/16/2017 Noo! Omar you bastard! |
| lilyflower101 chapter 11 . 3/19/2017 You will never get away with this Omar! You will be stopped by them before you get the money! |
| AshleyStewart09 chapter 11 . 10/2/2015 I hope you continue this, and they get a happy ending |
| You need to chapter 11 . 2/19/2014 oh my god! what is plan B! |
| NicNack4U chapter 11 . 2/2/2014 Hey, awesome story so far! I hope you continue it soon. :) |
| PockyCookie chapter 9 . 1/29/2014 Hey there, I really enjoyed your story. Your use of description is very good and it makes the story very believable and interesting. I find the characters very sweet and enjoy reading about Violet and Olaf's relationship. I have one suggestion though. In the chapters the text appears as a large block and if it were split into smaller paragraphs it would be easier to read. Other than that I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more from you. PockyCookie |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/24/2014 More please i want to find out about olaf and violet do they make up was olaf lying about starting the fire and the plans to keep his brother Omar from hurting violet Klaus and sunny what's going to happen |
| Mrs. Atticus Finch chapter 11 . 9/15/2013 Oh, my feels! T_T I hope she forgives him, or learn that it was all Omar. |
| PrettyGirlRock24 chapter 10 . 8/9/2013 Please... Don't broke up violet and Olaflove them together. Make them work together to make a plan! But great chapter Hated that he drunk again, really hope there's a happy ending! :) |
| Heart of books chapter 9 . 8/1/2013 Pleaes update soon . I love it (_) . I love your story all of it . |
| PrettyGirlRock24 chapter 9 . 7/1/2013 I LOVED this chapter please update soon |
