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OMFG I read this in 2013 when i was 9 and rlly into fable IM CRYING AAAAHHGH I LOVE THIS

this is my favorite aha

This was really good -/- and that ending though. I was really satisfied after I read all 38 chapters.

First chapter and I'm already enjoying it. Although I think it would of been better to start from the beginning to buid up Annabelle's character.

I cry every time I play watch or read this sence.I just finished the game yesterday but accdintaly(Sorry about bad spelling)skipped it so I wanted to read it so I did on this one then I watched it and now I'm crying all over again.I mean why...WHHHHHHHHHY did it have to be Walter I just got so atached to is and will always be my favorite character.(The princess comes in second place)

Aw, I loved it! (Although like in the game I wish you'd killed reaver) I especially liked your take on Elliot, because he was such an ass. When I got to that point in the game I wanted to tell Linda what an awful person he was and hook up with her (none of the male characters are really my type). Also, the you have wings line made me crack up because really, you'd think it would warrant some comment!

AMAZING STORY! I loved it sooo much I was so upset when I realized you couldn't romance Ben :( if only this story was the actual game hahaha it's fantastic!

I can't wait to read your other stories

This was amazing! I love the time you took to develop the characters in a way that the gameplay was unable to, especially with Eliot and Logan. I am suggesting this to all my friends that are equally as upset as I am that Ben is not yet a romanceable character. But still, reading your work is probably much more satisfying than a programmed romanceable Ben!

I think i died reading this. This is one of the most beautiful things that i have ever read. I hope that you are so proud of yourself, because you deserve to be. Thank you for gracing the world with your magical story telling abilities! You are wonderful :)

I just can't stop reading it!

I dont believe that chapter 11 was boring! I quite enjoyed it! I like the long chapters and you are a very talented writter I would buy this if were a book!

Its cool how you can read the different views from annabelle and ben

Thanks a lot for this Beauty story,...really i love it, Congratulations ! You perfectly describe Ben Finn I love him!
Grettings from Mexico! :)

Oh, just when I thought poor Swift's death couldn't get any more painful!
I know this is probably a little late since this was posted a while back, and I'm only part way through so far, but this is so well written and you've pretty much nailed the characters. The entire thing is just perfect. :)