this was so good! i love all your stories so much and this was definitely one of my favorites. i love your writing because you can really see how much steven loves jackie and that it’s not just on physical appearances, but you show that it’s below the surface. thank you :)

Oh. my. God. This blew my mind I- I don’t have any words. Okay well I do have words but I can’t even begin to think of how to explain it. I just spent the past 2 hours in the dead of night just absorbing this whole fic. Cried through most of it but it gave me a sense of relief and contentment by the end. Man this has got to be the best Groundhog Day inspired sort of fiction I’ve ever read. Just. W o a h.

nice story

Just want to thank you again for writing such a beautiful story! I binge read this and it truly is a work of art. How I wish you'd write again. No one else is quite as creative and a skilled writer like you are. Hope you never delete this story!

I binged every single word of this... it was incredible.

I laughed, I cried - literally sobbed, I loved every single chapter.

When he told Jackie she’d wake up in Chicago I literally wept.

This was a work of art.

You’re such a talented writer

THANK YOU FOR GIVING US THIS

This was an absolutely amazing story! God I dont know how hyde stayed sane for 4years! I was in tears when I got to the part about he was able to at least save the man's baby girl. All that ran through my head is what w.b said about his daughter and jackie's dad about her. Hyde gave that man something to live for. The whole journey from beginning to end with hyde was so in-depth and fantastic. Great writing!

Holy shit this was one of the BEST stories I’ve ever read. And I’ve read a lot! Soo good I stayed up till 430 to read it when I had work the next Day and I reread it immediately after I was done with it. Awesome job! Truely well done.

Loved it! Great book!

This is such a great story. I've read it a few times and it is like an old I can go back to again and again.

I was waiting for a “Jackie died” chapter and you fucking delivered. Ugh! The angst?! The tragedy!? Absolutely perfect. Wonderful writing! Beautiful!

Awesome story! !

You’ve created an amazing story. Truly. I recently got re-watched That 70’s Show, and of course went on a hunt for J&H stories due to that unmentionable season. I found one story that was amazing. And this one, this one is amazing as well. I have blurry eyes typing this. You created such an emotional rollercoaster but also a captivating one. I know it’s been a while since you created this but just wanted to let you know it’s amazing. And thank you.

Hi!
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just stumbled upon it.

I think this is the best fan fiction i've ever read, all fandoms included.

Your character depiction is amazing and the story unfolds in a way that kept me breathless from start to finish. Some of those scenes will haunt me for a long time.
With very little edits, I truly believe this could be made into a real novel and sold in libraries.
I would be happy to help you with this project, if you were interested. (Although english is not my 1st langage and I probably don't know much about publishing in your country, I could be a beta reader and help you with the few parts that could be improved.)
I am french, by the way, if you ever want to correct the dialogues in french ;) !

Thank you for this unbelievable reading experience.

SO GOOD! Love these kinds of stories. Read ya Later ;)

omgggggg i love this. they made it. they really made it and it's been a year and things really gotten so much better and theyve all grown a lot and i love it.

also idk why but i always get a ton of feelings whenever hyde and eric hugged and even in fanfics, it's no exceptions. and all those things hyde didn't say but clearly shows how much he missed eric - god i love these two.
and yeah it makes sense that if sept 8 1979 was on loop eric's flight woud've felt like forever ...
also i love the way you write eric, i could hear his voice in my head as i read. it's just so eric.

this is such a long ride with twists and turns and i'm so glad that they got their happy ending that they deserve. it's beautiful.
thanks for sharing this amazing story