Harry's the grumpy one and Alec is the dreamer... it's opisit... but its ok..

I think it was pretty well written, you just might want to add more details, and maybe make it a bit longer. I also think you should describe the characters more, and maybe make it a bit longer. But besides that, it was good!

The story is okay,but Henry is way 2 was always the dreamer not just doesnt ring is good,the idea of him gettig tired of racing is good

Good story overall. Slightly choppy grammer and over-used material, but the writer knows horses.

Henry on the other hand is kind of optimistic for the grouch I remember. An easy, quick read. My interest is perked...

Yah! Chapter 2! Hehe. I liked it, please continue.

Charismatic Millennium

Well that was great, it was brill 2 c some of the English bloodlines at last, go you cant wait 4 next chap

This was extremely well written! I can't wait for more!

This is really good...I'm intrigued...keep it up! PLEASE!

This is great but i think you should have made him by the Black. Keep it up!

Write the next part soon.

Charismatic Millennium

Great so far. Hee hee...if Alec decided to sell him as an eventer, Kate Downs would have bought him. (My main character in my story "Black Stallion's Eventer)