Kaya suits it better I think

After Merlynn tells Gwen about the kidnapping and I’ll see details you accidentally wrote Gwain instead of Hunith. Just thought I’d let you know. I’m loving this!

Yeah, I really am sorry but this chapter is super hard to read. Thoughts stop and in some paves repeat. I love the rest of your writing so far this one is just extremely difficult to immerse myself in since it’s so choppy.

I really love how you adapt the episodes to your image! It’s so cool! Although, This chapter has a lot of errors? Like unfinished sentences and such. Other than that it is Brilliant!

Hi! I know this was posted forever ago, but I’m just now reading it! In regards to your authors note about other fanfics, yes please! You’re an amazing writer and I would definitely check out your other stories! Especially the supernatural, Harry Potter, twilight, or vampire diaries stories cause those are my jam! Also thanks so such an amazing (and long) Merlin story! Loving it so far! xoxo

Great story. Surprised she forgave him at all. If I were her I'd probably only try and be friends but it would be a long while.

hwo

He has a sister. She was mentioned in the episode where Elyan was possessed. She was referred to as a "evil old toad" who Gwaine would love to see her banished.

I agree with you.

I'm so sorry... She Lives!

It would be, indeed.

Wouldn't they all be a year older because the show skipped a year from when Morgana went missing to when they found her.

daughter

You spelt sire "sere" and sir "ser"

I’m a few paragraphs in and the first thing I noticed was the overuse of semicolons. Change it up. Sure, they make your writing look fancy...until you overuse them.