Reviews for What the Neighbor Saw
pottersparky chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
This so great that just so honor to read it. It does have a screaming for sequel for it. It good that Snape got see that Harry is Lily's son and needs to have loving family. He needs to go to Amelia Bones and get her to see Harry's memories so have back up to keep that crazy foolish old headmaster who has to much power that needs to see that has no right play god with people's lives like he did to Harry. Part me wish that they are turn into rats and feed to Ms Figg's cats for their dinner. So you know that means that evil Marge with killer dogs as well. Please please please do a sequel so can be happy. I love Marie Jahoda getting Figg to seeing that Dumbledore need seek help making Harry stay there. Hope my review makes you smile.
Tenchi chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Not bad one shot. I just wish that those monsters were made to feel the pain they made harry feel. Nice that someone saw just how evil those sick people who should never be around children. Evil only wins when good people do nothing to help. I feel sorry for Dudley. He could have turn out better person if parents were not evil sick devil monsters. Do the right thing you just might save a life.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Nice story your Afrikaans I think was quiet good. I'm a south african who speaks English. It was compulsory for us to do Afrikaans right up to grade 12 which is out last year of school. I suck ed at it but it seems correct. I think that's amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Great story What I saw the word ouma I taught you were south african
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
Hy nice story was really good . And don't worry your Afrikaans was fine . I'm south African and I don't speak Afrikaans but it was compulsry in school. And I sucked but I do know that Ouma is grandma and kind is child . Just so you know for future stories Oupa is granfather and (it was baie goed) it was very good .
Baie Dankkie (thank you)
P.S if you using any of the afrikaamsword from my review just recheak in google. I sucked and even tho the words are right the spelling might not be
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Cute I liked it especially the kid that helped harry with the lawn mower nice job
DustyWolf chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Just wanted to let you know that the Afrikaans you used was correct :) I was pleasantly surprised when I read "Ouma" (brings back bittersweet memories) and even more so when I checked your profile and saw you were American (right?). I find it admirable that you created a character so far removed from your own life (or not?). May I ask why you decided she'd be South African?

Dankie vir die storie :D
Katie Who chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Oi, Miss Jahoda is such a sweet old woman. I love her. :) She cared for Harry like no one ever had before and was the only who helped him. I hope Harry does visit her sometime. :)
Yay! Severus can be such a badass. :D I love it when he scares the Dursleys. :D
I really do hope you'll write a sequel someday!

All the best, Katie.
1sunfun chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Nice.
KyubiChan95 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
*Hugs you* I love it! Please write more as soon as you can! Thank you for this story, I needed something touching to read.
jupimako chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Wonderful story! Thank you.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
I'm glad Sev saved him!

I'm glad the neighbor was sooo nice! So kind and really wanted to helped little-Harry! :'D

but what if Dumby-dore reject it and forced Sev to make him let Harry back to Dursley?! *worried*

I hope Sev nice to lil-Harry...
Abby Nesoya chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Aikowa Akihiko - You're an outstanding writer! I thoroughly enjoyed your story and look forward to more great writing from you! - Abby
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
In Czech "Jahoda" means "strawberry"!
LunaTime chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
What will dumbledore do?
37 | Page 1 .. Last Next »