| Reviews for My Missing Love |
|---|
   I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 13 . 2/13/2019 It’s so sad how Naruto and Sasuke's families were killed. Poor Naruto and Sasuke. I love how they both started to fall in love with each other. I love the plotline. It’s sad how they were seperated for 10 years. Poor Sasuke. I love male pregnancy stories! their son is so cute. I was wondering if you could please write another fanfiction slash story of Naruto? with the pairing Naruto/Sasuke? I was thinking you could write the pairing Naruto/Sasuke from the other world where Naruto is Menma. |
| gindensmi chapter 13 . 12/21/2018 You did a great job writing this story! |
| fictionisaction chapter 2 . 8/6/2018 one thing i don't get is how tf did orochimaru ever beat minato? but daaaamn if this ain't good |
| emowoods205 chapter 11 . 8/23/2017 I just realized that Sasuke is a teen Mom he got pregnant at 15...And Naruto is 16..Damn they young... |
| emowoods205 chapter 1 . 8/22/2017 I love the plot so far I just hope the story won't go by fast.. |
| Tuesday's-Here chapter 8 . 6/16/2017 The line "The cool night air hit the tip like a baseball bat hits a baseball." had me skidding to a halt to make sure I read what I thought I read. I know it was suppose to roll with the sexual theme that was going on but it just made me laugh, I've read quite a few lemons and I have never encountered a line quite like that. The overall story is pretty good and has an interesting story and plotline, a few spelling and grammatical errors but nothing glaringly obvious. I loved the idea that their bond was so strong that even though they were separated for 10 years they were still best friends! Evolving into something so much more is just sweet icing. Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us! |
| Niha161 chapter 14 . 4/5/2017 Fine, but its already so long after your lasr updating... Come on, updated... I know u want to |
| Person chapter 6 . 1/14/2016 Lol. Kyuubi totally stepped on him. |
| DreamCatcher121 chapter 13 . 5/17/2015 Lol "SHADOW COLON" ... I won't harp on you for spelling, but you might want to fix THAT particular one... -DC |
| notapieceofcake chapter 12 . 5/9/2015 Aahhh the drama! So happy that stupid snake is finally dead :D |
| notapieceofcake chapter 11 . 5/8/2015 I am /screaming/! Nasuto is /finally/ heeeere! Yaaay But... the last line has me yworried |
| notapieceofcake chapter 10 . 5/8/2015 I like how you used the concept of using the enemy's powers against them. Fuck the second big fight is gonna be between them and Orochimaru isn't it? Can't wait or that piece of crap snake to die! |
| notapieceofcake chapter 9 . 5/8/2015 Ohhh FUCK noooo! Killer B got hiiiim! Gdi! |
| notapieceofcake chapter 8 . 5/8/2015 Fuck. It's 3am I should really sleep lol Anyway God! This chapter was /hot/ though Naruto was extremely violent while killing the bastards |
| notapieceofcake chapter 7 . 5/8/2015 Aww Sasuke-bbyyy! This guy was an asshole . |
