Wow... I'm sorry but I need to pause. Fleur is WAY out of line. Harry just witnessed his girlfriend tortured and murdered! She's expecting him to just get over it and fuck her. It's kinda bullshit

Poor Harry, I don't think I can even comprehend the pain of what happened to Harry

Honestly, part of me hopes that the twins never find out about pranks done in one Five Nights at Freddy's fanfic I read called ”Expect the Unexpected”. Let's see there were glitter mines and bombs, caramel chocolate bombs that are capable of covering a restaurant lobby, cookie bombs, flour bags that explode on contact, an experimental paint bomb that made a tidal wave of paint, water balloons filled with skunk spray, the main character, Ruby, managed to at one point replace all of her coworkers lunch with exploding versions including pudding, a bedazzler that fires rhinestones at the strength of a nail gun, a paintball machinegun, the list goes on and on

Well, you warned us and it was done well. Very powerful and action filled. The Ministry fight was one of the best I've read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

comparing snape to batman is an insult to batman, that was so uncalled for

please update

Seriously u motherfucking bastard writter Thai is what u write Snape attacked harry from behind instead of killing Snape harry does a prank is this war a joke to u bitch of writter ? If the order is useless then so is this harry big words but little action

You keep messing up and calling Mad-Eye Moony instead of Moody. Moony is Remus.

I thought I ought to tell you, it's Parvati, no Pavarti. She's named for the Hindu goddess Parvati. Everyone always gets it wrong, you're not the only one, but I find it super annoying because it's such a common mistake, and I always correct it, it's nothing personal.

Luna is part of Ravenclaw, not Hufflepuff, which I know you know, so I'll assume this was an error.

That was epic! Absolutely brilliant! Thank you! Do I get some sleep or binge read the last part? Hahahahaha, no choice really. Part 3 here I come xx

I know this is a finished work but I have to say that the sex scene in chapter 28, while being expertly written, erm, I kind of skipped over it. Only because I feel that your work really didn't need it. Reading book one and up till now, it just didn't need to be included. I'm not a prude by any means and having read the uncensored version of 'Drackens ', I just feel that you kind of caved into pressure from reviewers asking for the porn. This is an excellent story and I'm thoroughly enjoying it, I guess my point is carry on writing the way you want to and not the way others want you to. Do you Get what I mean? Right, back to binge reading, thanks

Wonderful.

Minor typo: chapter 18(38): last sentence should be "He could not lose." not "He could not loose."

You have "all 3 of them" hesitating outside of the Hogs Head. I imagine you copied this over from the book, needs modified as it appears to be Harry and his "retinue".