Roy being a possessive dad is the cutest thing

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Man... This story made me realize how much like Mustang I am. At least, your version of him. Which I think is very similar to the original. Awesome one-shot! Loved it!

I love this! And especially the direction it took after the line about Roy hoarding Ed like a jealous lover, that was fantastic! I liked how Roy ran around to protect Ed, except for when Ed was within his sight, it was sweet.

This was a really good oneshot and I enjoyed it. Good job.

This is just too cute :3

There was a cynical undertone that I can't quite pinpoint but loved. It's very Roy in that way.

I really like this fic. Thanks for writing.

This actually warmed my heart in a way and made my day better. :D Thank you.

Love it.

Best summarization of how Roy feels about Ed and Al so far that I've seen through all these years. Well done. can you do on on Ed's view of his bastard commander? non-yaoi, please!

Awwwwwwww... it was so touching!

I loved this (though the jealous lover part was a bit creepy though I understood its meaning) good job XD

It's so cute. Why can't all RoyEd fics be parental?

This is a perfect explanation of why Roy acted the way he did when Ed was so willing to take orders from Archer.