this is too good.

I'm sure you know that I haven't read "Fissure, Games, and Revelations" (yet). I don't regret reading this either. The sex was very passionate, I could definitely tell that Shizuo and Izaya desired each other more anything else during their tryst, and it was glorious. It was like, they really and truly needed each other, and at least for a moment, neither of them were afraid to admit it. If only they would realize this in the canon verse! This was a very cute bit, and I enjoyed reading. Thank you, dearest!

My, that's so lovely! The way you wrote it was so adorable, so sweet, that I bet many readers just sighed happily(at least I did, like a stupid little girl XD)

But why is it that Izaya is sad when they're talking about his eyes? I mean, I'm sorry if I couldn't realize the reason exactly... Is it because they're liking each other? that he's felling unconfortable, or afraid?

The end was just pure love, thanks a lot for writing )

kisses o/

THIS WAS TO AMAZING FOR WORDS! I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!

Again, ILY! I will stalk you forever

FUCKING GREAT!

Cute :3

Ahora si tengo la confianza para dejarle un review. D Me gusto mucho este one-shot. Siento, un hilo de tragedia en algunas palabras. xD

I like the undertone of dark themes here... there's a slight agony... I can't quite explain it...

" His mind wasn't ruling his reasoning back then, because if he dared to use his mind, everything -he was sure- would shatter, and become complete mayhem." that's angst, that sense of hopelessness. The fear of losing something or someone.

This is good. I'm going to the main story! D

I. LOVED. IT. HOT- FLUFFY- ANGSTY-

*cries manly waifu tears of joy*

ASDSADdf. Your work is always so beautiful, Author-san! ;u;

So cute! So cute! So cute!

:'D oh dear... This... was... thank you...

OMG! I! They! It was! Just! Gah! D: So cute! ;u; good work!

Thats was so emotional! i definitly will be reading FGaR now!

Such a cute smut!~ Luckyily for me, I read the original story! :D