The whole story was pretty much hella dramatic in a way but the ending was funny I enjoyed it c:

Wow. Nice work! Really shows how creepy the twin demons can be!

so instead of breaking her out he decides to draw a picture? i like your interpretation of the demon twins' personality

I liked this a lot. Issun you naughty Poncle. I loved the personalities you gave Lechku and Nechku. Awesome job :)

Baka Issun, you are such a moron!

Wow, nice fic! Lechku and Nechku were my favorite bosses from the game (it was probably the top hats that sold me, to be honest) and I liked the way you portrayed them as cold, cruel, and cunning under their flamboyant, sophisticated aura. It was a small detail, but I also liked that you made Amaterasu's Celestial form with black hair instead of the common fanbase white. Amaterasu was very valiant in her debate with the twin demons :) The ending seemed kind of morbid to me, what with Issun leaving her frozen in order to paint...but I kind of liked it. Overall great story.

Oh, yay! I'm the first one to review! Hehe, well anyways, GREAT STORY! I loved it! It kinda reminded me of Alice in Wonder Land. With the tea party and the owls were coincidentally twins so that also reminded me of it. Anyways, very creative story, fun and playful! My favorite! -