Cool story can't wait to see what happens next, so I hope you update soon. later

This is really good. Do you think you'll be going back to it?

An interesting start.

I'm really curious how it goes.

Sorry sweetie, I know you wanted to make this a one-shot, but it doesn't feel finished and I want more! You must write more! Sam just walked out on Dean and never looked back? Impossible! Something's gotta happen, there's got to be some sort of resolution. It's a terrific start, like all your pieces that I've read so far I enjoy your writing, but I want MORE! Lol, am I a little demanding? Yup, you bet. Now sit down and finish this! :-p

want to know how Dean will make up for it

oh no please don't let it end ..want more it can't end like this.

You totally CAN'T end it there! That's so evil, LOL.

Please continue!