Eeee! My OTP being adorable. Thank you for the fic, it was really cute and I got a cameo from my favorite villain Clive! KTN

AWWWW Luke thinks too hard about things. And I SO love the part where Clive syas "Aren't you the lucky one" that cracked me up! And I love how close to the end it says that Clive is lucky that their is a window between Luke and Clive or then Luke would kill him for telling Layton. If I was Luke I would do the same thing if Clive wasn't so COOL! It's Romantic and funny the PERFECT COMBO! I LOVE IT!

Master of evil! Lol

Sincerely, Redsparrow3

Cute and brilliantly written! I love it! :D

This is soo cute :D

i wanna read more,

I wanna know more :D

WRITE ON! XD

Well this is different. This is the first well laytonxluke I've read. I knew you gave warning at the start but I think it's the ending that was a little werid. The beginnning was cute no doubt about that but the ending a little werid. The story was well written and I love what you did with Clive XD cz that's what I could see him do lol. Thanks for writing!

~ Middy

That was just disturbing, in all senses of the word. I mean, I always thought of Layton as kind of a father to Luke, or at least an uncle. And when he kissed Luke on the forehead, I just thought it was affectionate in a family sort of way, that it was just a father-son or uncle-nephew type of kiss. And when Luke got all freaked out, I was just like, "Well, this is how all stories go, he'll come home, and the professor will just be like "I only kissed you because I love you like a son/nephew." And then Luke would be like, "Aww, professah..." And then maybe they'd hug or something. But THIS...Eughhh! Dude, you just gave me SERIOUS Jibblies! I mean, I didn't realize that Luke would...erm...'misread' it like that. the fact that his mind would even GO there in the first place...God! And then the professor's just like, 'If you're willing to wait a few years..." And then Luke's just like, 'Really? Okay!" Oh my GOD! there is something SEWIOUSLY WRONG with your mind, dude. I mean, I don't have anything against gay people, but with that kind of age difference...THAT'S where you crossed the line (at least in my mind). I mean, you're good at writing. That much I can say. And I suppose if you can move me that deeply, you must be doing SOMETHING right. I am just...SEWIOUSLY creeped out right now. Well, whatever. I suppose I'll get over it eventually. But for now, good job, I guess. I gotta go...recover(shudder).

Dawww. CX

I liked it. I really like your writing and works :D

I ended up doing some lay/luke at one point, and people complained. I know it's weird but you gotta admit it's just adorable C:

Hi, that's me again :)

First, I'd like to congratulate you again for the wonderful portrait of the characters in the story. It's amazing how fitting are the reactions of every character, you're really sensitive _

Second thing... ehm... (I can't believe I'm really asking you this...) Would... Would you allow me to write a... M-rated fiction which is set about 3 years after this one (when Luke is legal, because true gentlemen aren't pedophiles XD). It could be quite "graphic", but I promise you that it won't be slashy, because I like keeping an eye on the characters' psycology in every contest, even in the most... unusual... contexts. And if you won't judge it absolutely appropriate, I'll remove it immediately.

Please don't say yes just to be polite, if you don't like M rated fiction it's perfectly fine with me, I don't want to ruin your story!

Aww, so cute...

Clive can be helpful, yay.

Loved it, still loving it.

Thank you!

:')

Its so cute

i luv your story and its more realistic than other story

Thx a lot for submit

That was really cute and fluffy, I liked it. I liked how Clive's role went, because I can totally see Clive doing that, hah. One suggestion, I found it a bit distracting, the way you wrote Luke's accent into his dialogue. I'd suggest just doing it with a few words (most writers I've seen do it with just professah, which I like, and a few other er words), and trust the readers to know what Luke sounds like in their head. But, overall, I liked it!