| Reviews for Beach Surprise |
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jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 11/10/2018 Me gusto mucho. |
Ichigo Oga chapter 1 . 1/13/2018 Isshin went too far with the fireworks |
Dee-Money chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 Nice story everything was good enjoyed the whole story beginning to end |
D.J. Scales chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 This is very well written. |
cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 6/9/2014 Well that was certainly a surprise. Good lemon. Keep up the good work. |
neamrack chapter 1 . 11/22/2013 Hey I read the whole series and thought it was great. The only objection I have is hat they all ended up living together, just thought it was kinda wierd. Look foward to reading more in the future! |
That Guy - Chaos chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 ya know what this is its a reverse gang bang 4 girls 1 guy |
KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 5/28/2012 OMG! I LOVED IT! |
mindmaster123 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011 This fanfic is so good as the others :) |
NaruHinaFanboy chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 Ichigo is definitely one lucky bastard! He got to have one of the best paizuri ever. Overall great job for writing this epic lemon and for never disappointing us with any terrible fanfics that you've been writing Raptor. _ |
Reishin Amara chapter 1 . 11/26/2011 god,i love all of these. LOVED THE PREGO ONE THE BEST THOUGH! SERIOUSLY! REBUILDING THE BOUNT MANSION TOO? BRILLIANT! |
warprince2000 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011 Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz) |
Kage Bijuu chapter 1 . 10/19/2011 All I got to say is that is very best Pazuri scene ever. |
shiwa55 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 wow lol xD |
gambler chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 great story i hope that you will make a sequel to that |