Why you no update... pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase

This is the best fanfic I've read in a long time! It feels like playing through the biggest DLC add-on to ME2 ever, or almost a sequel, really. I love Tali/Legion so much and the way you are going about it, the characterization, how you portray Legion, whom we had so little of in the games, makes me so happy. You're doing a great job and I can't wait for more! Please, please know that what you are writing is worth something to me. I love it! Can't get enough. Really, this fic is like having another Mass Effect game.

This is such an amazing story, tho I feel like I’m the only one finding this story this year, I do wish you could continue this story tho, you left it off with the obvious point it’s not finished yet it’s been 4 years, plz if you see this review continue the story. It has so much potential and I really want to know what happens next, plz plz plz I’m begging you to continue the story, you still have an audience :)

A great story. Please do not let it be abandoned like so many other beautiful works of art on this site. Please.

Your writing is very well done. The plot is good if a bit dry at times. I think you did a fantastic job trying to achieve emotional balance with a complicated character like legion with tali'zorah. Very thought provoking with some of your ideas. Before me3 came out I did always wonder if Shepard could have done more with the Normandy crew. Hunting down the illusive man would have fun I think or he'll even just more exploration into the prothean ruins would have been much cooler the just Shepard returning to earth and being locked up or grounded. Good job

Left alone, a flower will bloom but still wither in time. Overshadowed, it grows weak. But, if a flower is watched from afar and left to grow, it will be strong and far more beautiful than imagined.

Just made that up. I love the flowers messege!

Fucking fantastic story! I'm kind of annoyed that it will never be finished (no updates in 2 years writers block) but I can't complain after 220k words, thanks for the story mate.

Are you considering finishing this amazing fic? Or at least give us another cute Tali x Legion moment to provide some closure to the romance. You alone turned them into my favorite pairing

You should consider just posting a wrap up epilogue that contains any scenes you'd already really super super wanted to include, for closure on the Legion/Tali romance, if you don't want to continue XD

I really hope this gets an update soon...

This story is great more please

DAMN IT! The review accidentally posted! Let us start again. (A lot of information was in the review so we will not be repeating it.)

Anyway. As we were saying, the story's romance is like a mix between the fanfictions 'Geth Infiltrator' and 'Someone To Hold Me', from the former you have the build-up, description, reasoning and fluff and from the latter it's mature situations and character personalities, while still having that fresh sense to it with the detail you put in.

However, as stated in our premature review, we forgot the reason as to why they love each other, and all the nice things they do for each other do not seem like love but rather just below love like they are in the test phase. (Except the flower, again that was beautiful.)

We know people have mentioned this before but we have to mention it. The antagonists you have in the story, these 'Immortals' we think you called them, although creative they are quite confusing. They are described at times as a threat worse than the Reapers but at others they are described as beatable by the Reapers for reasons unknown. They eat souls for crying out loud, how have the Reapers beaten them into submission?! They are a good idea as they add a level of mystery and drama to the story, particularly with 'The Shadow Man' who we are interested in, but eventually it becomes hard to follow there plan and motivation.

We hope (for lack of a better word) we have have given you 'food for thought'. We are not sure what exactly we aim to accomplish with this review (and the previous one) but let us see what happens.

We will be watching.

-The Joining

A really good story here. When we discovered the largely underrated paring of Tali/Legion, we were interested in the idea and since then are very curious of the relationship pairing of Tali/Legion. Your story is no exception.

We like the build-up for the main romance. We always thought that love must have reason, if you do not have reason to love someone in is a poor romance. We also enjoy the other romances on the side, Garrus trying to be with Tali, Zaeed and Jack, Mordin and Chakwas, pretty much everyone trying to be with Shepard; it is fun. We will admit we were hesitant on the side romances though, but we eventually learned to live with it.

Speaking of romances our favorite scene was the flower scene. It was heart warming. The whole romance, to us, has some elements from the fanfictions 'Geth Infiltrator' and 'Someone To Hold Me'. F

However we are a bit confused as to why Tali and Legion love each other. You may have mentioned it before but we have forgotten it and, no offence, but we do not want to skim through the entire story just to find the reason.

While good, I guess it's not getting continued. Disappointing.

I hope you continue this story it the only one that legion show love for tali and its one of the best iv read so please update soon.