brilliant :)

Pout
Bathazar, even if dave doesnt love you
I WILL MAKE HIM
Great story

please, please write a sequel! it is so so GOOD!

Cool, please cont. I want to know if those two will end up together, please I LOVE IT!

Aww! This was so sad and yet so sweet! I love it!

Balthazar is almost the definition of angst. Poor thing; no wonder he has such a wicked sense of humor.

I'm quickly finding myself falling further than ever...seeing as I am getting into this pairing. This was well written and I like how you showed Balthazar's angst and how he isn't always confidant. Nicely done.

Ah-mazing. I'm such a sucker for angst, but this was well written and captivating. Brava.

Aw, I got achy-chest feelings on Balthazar's behalf all through that. Nice job working with Balthazar's perspective, btw. I found him a little tricky to get into, but you did it awesomely!

Great - but sad! - fic!

This is beautifully written, and I love the glimpse into Balthazar's mind, particularly his frustration that with all his skills and experience he can't compete with a teenage girl. Awesome. A lot of fics in this fandom depict Balthazar as very confident and controlled, which is nice, but I love it when I find one that explores his insecurity and the psychological damage the extended lifespan has wrought. Thanks for this!

NNNNN. MY HEART. IT HURTS. OWWWWWW.

This was not at all what I was expecting, but I still enjoyed it immensely. Just...everything, all of it, makes me want to tear up, just a little bit.

Aaah, this is perfect.