Since when is she calling Charles by his first name?

Charles would never do something as unethical as sleeping with or kissing his student.

After what happened with the girl in the corridor, it could be argued that people would be more scared of Rosa.
Erik was never such a creep as to ogle 18 year olds.
"Blood traitor"? Did Erik forget he was from X-men and not Harry Potter?

Alex is too old to be a student.
The teachers are afraid of her powers growing? The whole point of this school is to help students develop and control their powers. Charles would not hire people like that.
Rosa is clearly not ready at all to go help Charles fight Erik. This is a joke.

If she's a student of psychology she really shouldn't be going through high school again.
Why is Charles walking while having his powers?

She's had a surgery? That Hank performed? He had an operating room, the necessary equipment, and surgical training? Or was it that this unbelievable event happened so that Magneto can now control/kill her in a second?

And she's in her underwear because she was drowning? Wasn't the unbelievable surgery after she was rescued from the water?
And she's now fine, walking around in a dressing gown and her underwear after that surgery?

Ha, I not only read this story before and don't remember but I reviewed the exact same complaint. Sorry bout that.

oh thatt made me cry so much okay that is a really sad ending good work :)

I have a problem with this chapter. The girl she has a confrontation in the hallway with wouldn't be using that language in the 1960's. Not to say women didn't cuss at all but immediately acting aggressive and cussing like a sailor? You're used to the 21st century speaking patterns.

Absolutely amazing! This is one of my favourite fanfics!

Keep up the good work!

Can't wait to read the sequel! :)

fantastic story man really awesome.

i hate how much of a prick erik was in this one but it made the story and so did rosa, really awesome story line to bad its over, i feel for charles so bad :(

again excellent job! 3

Dear God that was beautiful. There are no words to describe how absolutely wonderful you story is. I love it. You have a real talent, don't ever stop writing.

XOXO

Dark

So sad...is it weird that while i was reading chapter 9-10 a extremly sad love song started playing on the radio? it fit so well and everything...it was weird but combined with thestory it made me cry..

Just saying WHAT THE HELL shes dead cant we have a happy ending for 1ce soz dont know how 2 spell tht but she died im so sad and this was my fav story, *sigh* keep writing :)

...thats not nice- thats not nice at all, in fact it was mean... REALLY mean:- making me cry like that, particularly given the fact I'm at work and people kept walking past my cubicle!

aw! such a cute and lovely story! i really liked it. shame that it had to end so soon. you have talent, for writing such a heart wrenching story!