Reviews for These Days
twilight86 chapter 1 . 11/14/2018
The story itself was good, but the paragraphing could be better. Each paragraph is way too chunky and I legit get headaches from these kind of paragraphs
Unruly Queen chapter 1 . 3/21/2018
Tots awesome. Hot!
Fleiur chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
Hot AF! The ending was so sweeeet. :-)
Y.Z03 chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
loved the ending
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
Like, like, like!..
twlightbella chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
Aw sweet husband wife moment
Percy Ghazi17 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
bloody hot (ʃƪ)
Drakhiemoine chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
kinkyly hot... rawr lol. glad the fire still there even tho its alrdy 10yrs of togetherness. hehe
PhoenixPixie chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
This was good...but you have to space it out. It's too much in one paragraph...this is creative fiction you are allowed to bend the rules a little. Whenever someone says something that belongs to its own line. Paragraphs, even mini two line paragraphs are our friends.
Katie Michelsen chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
This is very good! I loved it!
HalfBloodPrincess509 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Wow that was truly amazing
Lingo10 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Wow that was hot but you could their passion and love for each other emitting from the story! Good going!~ Nice piece.
TrueLoveIsHardToFind chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
DAMN! this was fucken sexy as hell! and the writing was absolutely phenomenal, no surprise there!
FigrSk8r13 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
That was so sweet, loved the ending, nd very hot! Haha
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
That's brilliant! :)
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