| Reviews for These Days |
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twilight86 chapter 1 . 11/14/2018 The story itself was good, but the paragraphing could be better. Each paragraph is way too chunky and I legit get headaches from these kind of paragraphs |
Unruly Queen chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Tots awesome. Hot! |
Fleiur chapter 1 . 11/1/2016 Hot AF! The ending was so sweeeet. :-) |
Y.Z03 chapter 1 . 8/28/2016 loved the ending |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 Like, like, like!.. |
twlightbella chapter 1 . 10/13/2015 Aw sweet husband wife moment |
Percy Ghazi17 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 bloody hot (ʃƪ) |
Drakhiemoine chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 kinkyly hot... rawr lol. glad the fire still there even tho its alrdy 10yrs of togetherness. hehe |
PhoenixPixie chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 This was good...but you have to space it out. It's too much in one paragraph...this is creative fiction you are allowed to bend the rules a little. Whenever someone says something that belongs to its own line. Paragraphs, even mini two line paragraphs are our friends. |
Katie Michelsen chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 This is very good! I loved it! |
HalfBloodPrincess509 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 Wow that was truly amazing |
Lingo10 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 Wow that was hot but you could their passion and love for each other emitting from the story! Good going!~ Nice piece. |
TrueLoveIsHardToFind chapter 1 . 6/26/2011 DAMN! this was fucken sexy as hell! and the writing was absolutely phenomenal, no surprise there! |
FigrSk8r13 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 That was so sweet, loved the ending, nd very hot! Haha |
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 1 . 6/12/2011 That's brilliant! :) |