Damn...I just...Why was this not finished. It is so goooooooood. I want to know what happens. There are so many damn pieces of plot. I love your writing style. It flowed so beautifully. Thank you for writing this.

I've been rereading this fanfic for so long. It's so good I want more but it's been a while since you posted a new chapter. The Flickr of hope is dying like charmander's tail in the rain. Please save my tail of hope for the next chapter dear writer amen.

Why why why do writers do this shit. If you were goin to abandon tis story in d first place then why write it? So many people have gotten hooked by this story and still no update for like,a year? This sucks. And i really liked this story. Try to update please.

It's been a long time since you updated but I am here to fuel your inspiration. Please for the love of god update for I am craving the next chapter.
Itachi getting perplexed with sasuke falling in love when he doesn't even know he already is falling hard for another sexy blond XD ...or does he know

Omg this is one of my favorite stories EVER! I can honestly say that this is the hottest and most amazing DeiIta I've ever read. I really like this story, the plot and the characters personality are just amazing. I was getting tired of the usual ItaDei so you definitely reconciled me with this couple. They are just so cute together but I'm looking forward to more SasuNaru. I hope Sasuke will get his head out of his ass. Anyway thank you for this work.

I liked this fic a lot for the most part - many sub-plots, evil schemes, politics, power-struggle and romance all in one. I didn't like the drug-party, I know it didn't happen for gratuitous lemons, since almost everything was off-screen. So I figured maybe you wanted to make some more progress in romance part of the fic. I was kind of disappointed everyone had to get high and laid. I couldn't find it in myself to feel sorry for Gaara (his idea, btw, why would he even suggest something like this act so irresposible all of sudden?) or for Hinata. I also hoped for first SasuNaru intercourse to happen in the different way. Naruto didn't look even slightly upset, even though I thought he had wanted to do it with someone he loved. Oh well. I guess he wasn't ready, while sober.

I have no mixed feelings about the last sasunaru scene - I know I hate it. I'm so disappointed in Sasuke. Beginning was similar to many other fics - physical attraction, lust, funny banter. I didn't like it, when Sasuke saw no problem with using Naruto's instincts to get into his pants (kitchen scene) or admitted he isn't going for anything long-term (dance scene in Suna). But I thought - ok, the feelings would keep growing, at some point he would start feeling something more deep and fall in love. It would get only better. He even confessed to his brother he might be in love. And then distaster happened. Let's be honest, Naruto wasn't in the right state of mind. Even if the blond asked to be fucked - Sasuke didn't do it to make him feel better (it most likely made everything even worse, although, if it was more about punishment, then I guess it served its purpose), but to get some pleasure out of his body. He can tell himself it was consensual to sleep better at night. He didn't seem to care Naruto agreed to sleep with him, but not 'for him'! There were no feelings involved on both parts. That hardly makes Naruto his. Who knows, maybe anyone would do, but Sasuke was the most convenient choice at the time.

Using Naruto's vulnerability and, moreover, getting off on it? How much lower can one get (rape is the only thing I can think of)? We don't know much about what happened to Sasuke with Orochimaru, he might be very seriously messed up after all, but if that's the only "love" Sasuke is capable of, I don't want it for Naruto. I get Itachi wants to protect his brother from cruel memories, but Sasuke might not be able to overcome it, unless he remembers and gets some serious help (if that "twisted love" is really caused by old scars)

You said there's 80K left, so I would really like to read the rest. I hope you planned happy ending for SasuNaru, so I am really curious, what you're gonna do about all this mess. :)

This is one of the best Sasunaru fictions ever written, hands down. Like, I love everything from the plot to the way you portray the characters; I especially enjoy the humor you inject from time to time. (I think my favourite was when Naruto was appalled by the idea of an armless Hokage... Oh, the irony.)
Thank you for investing so much time in this story. I appreciate every chapter, and even though you haven't updated this in a long time, I hope you'll consider writing at least a little bit more. (the cliffhanger is slowly killing me... *Dies a messy death*) anyway, you should keep writing in general. Your talent is INCREDIBLE.
Thank you again for working so hard on this fic!

(I hope this review doesn't pass as too muddled or hyped... I blame it on my fatigue. It's 2AM but I couldn't bring myself to turn off my phone because I wanted to read your story in one sitting. It was too good to put down. (: )

So, I have re-read every chapter and I still have no idea what is going on. I'm working my brain cells very hard, they are rubbing together to try and see the clues you are laying down to no avail. I was hoping Sasuke would be able to resist Naruto's call but it looks like he didn't and now the damage is done. I don't know if any of the kids will be able to recover from New Years and most certainly if Naruto will be able to recover from this night. I don't know if he even processed the first time. Everyones past just needs to come to light cause the intrigue is killing me. The murdering psychopath has to be Kabuto or a split personality Orochimaru, there isn't anyone else.

ja ne till next time and I hope you get your mojo back

I honestly hope you update soon! I'm loving your story !(:

Love this

Awesome

sasuke is stupid and an ass. there better be an explanation fer this and he vetter say sorry and take the punches coming his way if he wants naruto to be his (emotionally being the more favored)!

my god, yer writing is awesome, i love it and it's so well put together (obv, i wasn't herw fer the bginning of it all, but i still appreciate yer effort). please come back and finish! subtlty isn't my thing, however, so a lot of the signs/clues are vague and easily missed by me (to answer yer statement made in a previous chapter ago). XD

danzo is a disgusting human being.

i love how you equally make each of the characters have their own flaws. at first i thought it was simple sakura bashing, but then i didnt consider hinata would ever be that kind of person to condone such talk! :o at this point, i think only naruto, gaara (though would kill a fly if needed), sasuke (even though he's an ass!), and itachi (and he has his hidden skeletons, too) seem the most damned sincere! even deidara had ulterior motives! ...ok, so maybe naruto is the only sincere and kind and uncorrupted one, LOL. ._. but... he's our baby, so that's understandable! D:

omfg, sakura was actually killed. was not expecting that. o.o