I think i might kill myself if you dont continue.

Now all I can imagine is a VERY frustrated Hermione sticking her head out of a car window and screaming at the Minotaur "DONT MAKE ME AVADA YOU, YOU OVERGROWN COW"

It's one of the best stories I've ever read and I have read over 300! Don't stop please a lot of really talented people have given up their stories . Don't be one of them! Especially seeing as this storie has so much potential keep writeing or I'll find out who you are and kick your but!:)

gd start, bt u must kno tht im a hard reviewer & a vry hard person 2 impress, so: u betta make dis gd. (srry 2 b rude, bt i mn it)

I adore this story. Can you please restart it?

I really love this story :) you should continue it but if you don't want to would it be okay if I adopted it from you? I won't be able to write it as brilliantly as you but it's worth a try.

crazy, really crazy, but I LOVE it!

can't wait for the new chapter!

A bit ooc and a little confusing but otherwise okay. And oh, you need to work on your grammar a bit :P It's really interesting so please update soon :)

I love it ;D

Write more :P

ALSO

Dunno if you heard but i have written *counts on fingers* 4 more stories apart from PERCYtoHARRY :) Thought you might want to check! AND WRITE MORE CHAPTERS NOW!

Awesome I just read it, but you should keep writing. Please do I dont stop thinking of the stuff I read until it has a good ending!

Haha! Love the chapter! Update ASAP!

One critic, though. Remember to put a space after punctuation.

Other than that, it was awesome!

Stupid computer!I just wish that it would stop taking away words!

Ok, to tell the truth that confused me.

There weren't space between dialoge - that's when people speak.

I think you could have expanded on Hermione's childhood a bit tho instaed of it just being a few sentences explaining it. (like how Rick Riodan explained Percy's childhood qutie well in PJO:LF).

And what was with 'the voice' in Hr's head sayin to get down... Would Zeus even project his voice into demigod's thoughts? I think you should have just made Hermione have a bad feeling when ever she was airbourne instead of Zeus telling her off, cos that would have been more subtle AND mysterious.

On a good note there were no spelling mistakes.

(Sorry if i seem a bit harsh but I think this type of detailed review rlly tells the writer wot they should work on in their fic.

At any rate I think its better than:

"Nice fic :D

could b a bit longer tho

can't wait till nxt chap".

Not to say that I haven't ever written reviews like that but I think constructive critism is best.)

I liked it! I have no ideas either, but it was really good! Update soon!

Great start!