I LOVE this way of doing it. More please. This is fantastic, and the comments to Nancy seal the deal for me.

The is a marvelous idea! Carry on my wayward son ;) !

Love the way you started the thing on cas and the way you could make his life story in a book love it :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

I love the two little things on the book really looking up to the book hope I can read it soon big fan of castiel (Misha Collins) and the TV show supernatural :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

I like it so far, it's an interesting concept, but it's a little difficult to distinguish the author's notes from everything else, ya know? Maybe label them, or italicize them?...

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I like this so far. I'm new to the show so I don't know everything but I love how you took the end of season 5's idea and are using it for Castiel.

i like chuck's asides and YOU SHOULD UPDATE THIS -guilt inducing glare-

1) i prefer it without chuck's notes. they're cool, but they take me, and im guessing others, out of the story you're trying to tell. it messes up the vibes and rhythm of the reading.
2) this is really cool and i really hope you come back to it! it's really fluid and vary reminiscent of swan song!
3) i'm favoriting already simply for the " little boy who grew into a man who didn't think he deserved it" line! beautiful!

oh! it's so clever how you made this into an editors edition! i love it! and 'I like to think Castiel was made out of the desire of love from a little boy who grew into a man who didn't think he deserved it' is one of the truest and most beautiful things ever written! utterly stunning- please write more!

also, i couldn't help noticing that 'ect.' should be 'etc.' at the end of the first sentence ) xx

I'm not sure if I like this formating or not. It's a bit wonkey. So, perhaps strickly story theme would be better.:D

I like it and would very much enjoy more! I love both Castiel and Chuck so it's great and I think you captured Chuck perfectly here! BTW, I think you did have a slight typo at one point, evens should have been events. But I do really want to see more of this in the future!

This is a very interesting and awesome idea! Please do more!

If you add more, I'd read it.

detest it my ass - this is pure gold sweetie! you manage to capture chuck's style perfectly, and your writing is simply bewitching! so basically, you HAVE to continue this, or i may have to hunt you down and tickle you until you do ... be warned: i'm the tickle-meister! xx

I'm liking where your going with this. Please do continue.:D