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Annette11418 chapter 35 . 7/16 From start to finish this story was SO GOOD! I could never stop reading, each chapter was well thought out and emotional. I loved the family theme as it was a breath of fresh air from all the other Hermione fanfics. I also loved the personal stories you shared about you and your husband at the end of certain chapters (I cant beleive you met your husband in the shower! |
lorlorgrace chapter 35 . 7/9 I think Gideon Harry would be more appropriate if she's wanting to name him after Harry. Leave the family name for Harry's kids. |
lorlorgrace chapter 3 . 7/8 Does it count as a major twist if it's literally in the description box? hahaha |
wolfkitty1103 chapter 35 . 3/22 Great story - I loved that it was all from George's POV, it made for an enjoyable read. Thanks so much for writing and sharing! |
wolfkitty1103 chapter 12 . 3/22 Cute date! I love the ring too! |
wolfkitty1103 chapter 4 . 3/22 Unfriendly eyes?! Way to slip that in there! |
northpurplesky chapter 13 . 3/1 i really love this story.. it makes me think about the reality among us.. family, friendship, even money.. |
The cat with blue eyes chapter 35 . 10/1/2019 very nice story! I like the fact that you added in every chapter a little bit of your story! I guessed it was crabbe but I was surprised to find out it was Crabbe senior! |
JC chapter 35 . 8/6/2019 Hah! Snog a dementor, I love it! |
Uney Unacorn chapter 35 . 4/3/2019 I the only problem I have is that you rush through this chapter you could gav at least on or two more fir I would have like to have read about Hermione other child birth and what it name was, I would have like to have read more about the twins being sent off to Hogwarts and tha gos the same of the other little one but other then that it was nic ed very nice. Like all of it from Christmas to George's and Hermione's 2nd wedding. Thanks so much for sharing your story I enjoyed it ver much. |
Uney Unacorn chapter 34 . 4/3/2019 I'm so GLAD that this hole CRAZY HORRIBLE thing is done and over with FINALLY. I'm glad that the wrizards they caught after the last attack had the main culprit of this hole thang. And I must say that I have no pity for Crabbe at all he got what he deserved and nothing less. Oh George buffoon it's you that Hermione loves it's you that Hermione wants and needs it is clearly obvious that this is so to everyone...well everyone but you, you buffoon. Now that you know it dont for get it okay its you and it always will be. |
Uney Unacorn chapter 33 . 4/2/2019 This was a sad chapter. I HEATED that Hermione had to gave her memory of terrible horrible night I HEATED that all poor George could do wach as he and Harry went though the pensive that had Hermione's memory so that they could get the evidence that they needed. Yes Hermione was safe at the Ministry so of course this wasn't happening to Hermione now... but that doesn't make it any easier for this DID HAPPEN Hermione DID go through this it truly happened neather Harry nor Ron could help her when it was happening nore could George (for of course he wasn't there but STILL doesn't make it any easier) and now neather George nore Harry can do anything to help her out in any way all eather of them could do was just wach. I'm just happy that they were able to get what they needed to even if I dont know or understand how they did I hope one of the scumbags that they have after attacking George, Hermione, Fred, and Angela is the one behind all this and not another ass of an wrizard who smells of gunpowder for everyone's sake especially Hermione and George. |
Uney Unacorn chapter 32 . 4/1/2019 George doesn't need to worry whatever he gaves Hermione for Christmas she'll love for it will (going to sound cheesy here) soming from the heart he just needs to hurry up and get it. I'm proud of George for not getting to annoyed or upset with Hermione and her mood swings I knew he is hurt by what she said but he doesn't hold it against her or talks back he takes it and try calm down her down. I dont think Hermione dislike her mood swings just as much as George does. I think now that Hermione is really starting to show she pregnant it is becoming more real that she and George are on there way to becoming parents and that both scared her and delights her. I think she is more worried about money now because she what's to have what she need to have in older to take care of the little one and not having to be stress out about having enough but. Over studying is not going to help her and it not good for the baby fir she is stress out. Glad that George was able to convince Hermione to work a WWW with him and Fred hopefully she'll just work there for a while and take her OWL'S in January as she was going to do before she realized she was pregnant. Should have known that That Death Easterner was going to show up at some point and of course he brought friends thanking they were going to get the upper hand. Ya as if that cowardly git and his dimwitted pals got there but kick by two school dropouts not bad Fred and George not bad at all and it really no surprise they can read each other like a book and the had luck on there side for they thought there spells out unlike the attacker's. I'm glad that Fred was able to stop George from doing any of the unforgettable courses and just as happy that George was able to convince Hermione to apparat with Angela instead of saying and fighting for I like George know that she could fight with him and Fred like a prow and a good deal better un some ways but. She seriously need to think about their baby |
Uney Unacorn chapter 31 . 3/30/2019 George really likes Hermione's hair, good thing too seeming how she has so much of it and it appears that she likes him fixing it up and all. Christmas is my favorite hollyday closely followed by Halloween then Thanksgiving (getting off topic sorry.) Fred's, George's, and Hermione's plan for Christmas seems like great fun and I have no doubt that Angela will be on board with it. I hope that George fear of Hermione and the baby getting hurt changed his mind about their Christmas plans they have a little more then a month to work it all out and with hers,his, Fred's, and Angela's brain working together they we find a way to make it safe for sure, not to mention that Hermione will never do anything to endanger the baby, and of course she has George himself, Angela and Fred to protect her of need be. Ha I knew that George words about everyone would be protective of Hermione to the point of anoyingness and just as I thought George is the worst of the lot. I loved all but the prank on Mrs, Norris to me that one was cruel. I'm glad that George's and Fred's pranks were able to make the Death Easterners life a little more irritating and troublesome no matter ho small it was. Hermione really can't tell Fred and George off about the dangers they put themselves in dearing the war she always was in mare danger then they ever were also it's in the past now there us nothing to do to change it. I love getting the tree and decorating it, for it is such great fun especially when you doing it with good friends and family. It was a very funny moment with Fred and the tree just a few questions. Why didn't Fred leveltate the tree like George did? Did he not just earlier on reminded Hermione that they were wizards when she managed it be to cold for deep sea diving? Is he unable to do that spell because of his injuries from the wall falling on him? And if so why was he able to carry it wouldn't that be heard on him? Or is it that Fred just likes doing some things the heard way? Whatever the reason it was funny as was his moment with the tinsel. The way Hermione feels about her looks while pregnant is the way quite a few woman feel while being the way George see her as more beautiful and breathtaking I like to believe most husbands feel that way about their wives. |
Uney Unacorn chapter 30 . 3/30/2019 This was a bitter sweet chapter...well the frist have was that is for very obvious reasons the other have if this chapter was pure joy and happiness. I love the sweet moment of George and Hermione earlier on in this chapter I just HEATED the reson for it what George told Hermione was in every way true she is all those things and more just as all that Hermione told what George is is true is is all those things and more. Thie last half of this chapter made me smile what George said about Hermione being protected by everyone to the point it will be anoying is so going to happen and George is going to be the worse of them all Harry and Ron will be second. |