Reviews for If It's not Broken Smash it Into A wall
Seleayn chapter 42 . 3/2
My this is cute though UwU
Seleayn chapter 39 . 3/2
though this story is great, Sakura is weak here- she's like that 12-year old self again instead of being a headstrong 19-year old :
Seleayn chapter 32 . 3/1
Those Itachi facts had me laughing and crying- or both
Guest chapter 12 . 11/3/2018
I love you. Oh my god it's so funny I'm on the floor right now and I think I'm gonna die from laughing. I need oxygen
Guest chapter 42 . 2/24/2018
That was plain awsome!Thank u soooo much for this story
Crystalbluesky chapter 42 . 12/10/2017
i like this story so much, but the inner's sakura talking sometimes is so annoying
EmeraldBlossom17 chapter 42 . 8/21/2017
Sequel pleaaaaaase
Maso Neko-chan chapter 23 . 2/7/2016
YES
Maso Neko-chan chapter 22 . 2/7/2016
LOVE IIIIT
Maso Neko-chan chapter 21 . 2/7/2016
AAAAA I SQUEALED AT THIS CHAPTER ASDFGHJKL
Maso Neko-chan chapter 20 . 2/7/2016
I LOVE THIS AJMXALLSMXMZ
AND I LOVE SHISUI MOST OF THEM ALL
AND ITACHI IS A FINE PIECE OF ASS
AND SASUKE IS FEKEN HOT
*ahem* excuse my hormon driven review
CheeseBrainGirl chapter 11 . 11/4/2014
Hmm... good question... either Shisui or Itachi for me...
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Can't decide...
LoLi15 chapter 39 . 8/8/2014
And yeah! Sorry for reviewing in bits and pieces. Got limited characters to type in. Stupid phone.
Anywho, what i forgot to mention is that i absolutely love the valentine's day action minus the part sasuke forcing himself on sakura but liking every bit when itachi was fretting over sakura. Sigh... (dreamy look)
Overall plot was good but damn i didn't expect Shisui liking Anko. That completely threw me off.
Well i would have loved to see the fight in the end.
So anyways, again thank you for this wonderful fic and i'm hoping to read more of your new works soon. Until then, Ciao! Sayonara! Winks.
LoLi15 chapter 40 . 8/8/2014
10) There should have been more ANBU missions, Training, Teasing, gentle caresses, ghostly kisses. JUST MORE ITASAKUNESS!
Ahem! Sorry! Shoulda laid off the coffee.

Anyways, what i wanted to say is that the little things should matter too. There're many loops & hole here and there. I know the story was basically meant to be hilarious, but later on it took off towards Drama. Taking care of little things makes reading all the more pleasurable.
But what took the limelight for me is 'Inner Sakura'. She cracks me up like hell. Kudos! The things she comes up with to annoy Sakura. 100 reasons why sakura is an idiot. That was effin hilarious. I would have loved to hear all of them. 1st reason was the best though. Explains almost all other reasons. Haha.
Anyways, just wanted to help out a good writer become a better one (even though some may disagree with what i said)
But judging from your recent work, you have improved drastically (pertaining to My girlfriend Your girlfriend Our girlfriend)
So Hope to see better works from u soon.
LoLi15 chapter 41 . 8/8/2014
4) Why were Kushina & Minato completely chucked out of the story? They should have at least been there in ANBU's exam, if not for formality sake.
5) For the love of kami, why kakashi never used his summon dogs to find Sakura?
6) Ino being so unaffected the next day dancing around with Shikamaru when Sasuke left her after kissing and carrying her bridle style just to try and kiss her best friend afterwards is so Un-Ino-like. ( Man that was a mouthful)
7)Anbu training not elaborate enough. It would have been a nice plot for relationship building. (suggestion)
8)Again why kushina and minato not part of the whole plot? At least a glimpse? They are like everyone's favourite couple. Like its stamped to our brain cells. (Okay this one is purely biased view)
9) Sword? (Image: Troy) Yes. I cried when achilles died. Ahem. Ok, i think the better word was 'katana'.
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