I loved how you wrapped this up! It felt like a series finale and it was perfect. I really like how even if Eric and hay lin are the main characters, you gave everyone development and a chance to shine.

Simply fucking amazing. Lillian and Chris is honestly otp rn

I love w.i.t.c.h! LOVE the fanfiction with Hay Lin. Are you going to write more about this series? With OC? Or is this the end of w.i.t.c.h fanfiction. Or it could be an SI OC. Our world into the w.i.t.c.h world. Tried to write myself but sometime I think to much or I change the story to much. I LOVE your fanfiction!

Typo aside (where a hood instead of wear a hood) a pretty good finish. Keep writing

IT'S OVER?! I don't even know how to process this. I've been reading for such a long time, and rereading and rereading again over a dozen times... wow... this feels like the end of an era. Like Endgame end of an era.
Congratulations? (IDK my brain is clearly not working.)
On an ironic note, even with how long this chapter is the ending feels well paced and not at all rushed and it seems organic with all of the major relationships that were the focus being wrapped up and dealt with.
And you know what? I'm actually really happy it wasn't some long drawn out -BUT she betrayed us!- issue. This is war sister! Forgive and move on or be eaten by the fricken dragon!

So... yeah, that is all I got. Love your work, happy and sad to see this end, and I'll keep an eye out if you ever desire to dip back into this pool again.
Thank you for your time and dedication and I look forward to rereading both stories over and over again!
(PS I have major anxiety to stories getting deleted here on Fanfiction so please never remove this stories *sad puppy eyes* like seriously three of my favorites disappeared two nights ago and I legit have no clue what stories they were which kind of makes me want to hyperventilate.)
Bye~

I've been reading this for 4 years goddamn

Oh my lord, I just realized I've been here since 2016 (which is nothing because you've been writing since 2011 and still continue to!). I'm so glad I never forgot about this book. Totally worth waiting for each chapter. I'm gonna be here for another decade if I have to.

OH GOSH YOU UPDATED!

Oh boy, this chapter was something. I'm so glad to know Ronin was Chris the whole time, I always wanted Chris and Lillian to be together in this story. I'm really upset he was captured — I hope he survives! I can't bear seeing Irma lose her brother.

I miss Hay Lin's trio. I can tell every character and reader misses them. As for your writing I have to admit it's really improved and the plot is mesmerizing. The Chris plottwist shocked me, I can't believe I never suspected that he's Ronin. Keep up the amazing work. Your book deserves way more readers, this is the perfect continuation of the W.I.T.C.H. series, it cannot be denied. Hope we see a new chapter soon! I definitely can't be the only person who's been checking this story every few months or so to check if it got updated. I know 813 in the reviews must be one of them!

After a rewatch of WITCH, I desperately wanted to read fanfic that continued their story, and I found Fly With Me and it’s sequel. I am incredibly amazed with this story! I love how you’ve written every character, the entire mythology you’ve created for this, and the relationships between all the characters. It’s just so good! And I’m so glad you’re not abandoning it, even if you’re busy with life. Can’t wait for you to continue, and good luck with your Masters!

I was rereading the story and in one of the chapters where Irma healed Cornelia and Orube said that Ronin had a connection to the water element! I was like aw man now it makes sense love love love it !

I know this is a little random but there's a song that says EXACTLY how are Eric and Hay Lin in "Butterfly to the soul".

I swear I can even hear them singing this, and each time I read this fic I listen to it.

It's "Little do you know", by Alex & Sierra, just Eric singing the girl's part and Hay Lin the boy's.

I just had to say it, sorry hahaha

Just when I was about to re-read for the fifth time your story, I see that YOU UPDATED!
I can't believe it, thank you sooo much TT

So it WAS Chris behind Ronin's mask. I said it in another review, it made sense.
Now I have conflicted feelings. I love Chris. I love his character and I love that it has a bigger roll in the story. At the same time, I was beginning to like Ronin like another character in the fic. He was new, he was serious, and he was caring despite his restrictions. Now, being Chris I feel like he interacted with them more because he knew them rather than it being a character trait.
I know it doesn't make sense, and I love it that it's Chris, really. I just feel like we've lost "Ronin".

Sorry about this long ramble XD

Anyway, now I'm worried about what's gonna happen to Chris AND Eric! What EXACTLY happened to Eric anyway? I really didn't get it. One second he's angry at Nerissa, at himself? and the next he's inside some "cocoon" like some butterfly. Is he going to transform or did he reject the necklace?

And lastly, where are Hay Lin, Nigel and Joel?! TT

Well, thank you for updating. I really like this story and the new chapters. I'm going to re-read "Fly with me" and wait for new updates :)

You've updated ! I've been keeping a watch on this story and rereading it a thousand times over! I love it I really wasn't expecting Ronin to be Christopher, a real shocker. It just seems things are getting worse and worse for the team ( which I love). I love that this is one of the few stories that centred on Nerissa. I absolutely love her and she's so much more evil and seductive in this story. I really can't wait for the next chapter! What's goin to happen to Chris and what's Nerissa's next move? Can't wait

I knew Chris was Ronin! :)
Oh... yeah sad stuff about the rest of the chapter...
:) Yeah I cant stop smiling about that little bit...
What’s Chris x Lillian’s pairing name..? Chrian? Liris? I think I like Liris best out of the two I just came up with!
(I’ll go be sad tomorrow)
And update again sooon!

Still here. Still waiting. Read the previous review — thanks for agreeing with me lol. As for the author, please tell us if you're planning to update or not